Shameless request, but whatever. Please don’t turn this into a harem where the mc surprises all the bad guys and wins the hearts of all the maidens. I don’t want to see another story with potential become a harem novel that can only repeat the same thing over and over.
The story so far has been great, the journey from the village to the city was an enjoyable read. This can be attributed to the Lu sibling duo, Lu Ling and Lu Li. The stories end goal is already known, as Lu Ling tells her brother about their parents disappearance, and how to find them. And the process in getting their parents back would be an arduous journey, as it consists of a three step plan: [1] Get into an influencial family, and get stronger. [2] Find another family, but this time, a family higher up in society. And then continue to get stronger. Also, so that they have access to getting to the central plains. [3] Get to central plain and find another powerful family, so that they could help get their parents back.This is the setup of the story, however, it isnt as linear as it seems, because the Lu sibling's parents, especially their father, has a powerful family background. So, it would involve more than just getting into a family and getting stronger.However, the story, to me, loses its charm as the sister, Lu Ling, is taken away from a sect, from central plains. The story up to that point was heavily enjoyable due to Lu Lings insight into why they must continue to get stronger, and that everything tha happens to them is merely a stepping stone in their path. And how strong she is, mentally. She doesnt take **** from anyone, and doesnt rely on strength, but her wits into taking put her enemies. But, i do see why they had her taken out off the story. To help develop Lu Li's bland character. Hes strong, but only in terms of physicality. He is incompetent, and relies heavily on his sister so that he doesnt do anything stupid. So, its reasonable as to why they removed (temporarily) Lu Ling. But, then they slap us in the face and have another female character take over her place. However, she isnt smart, isnt competent, and is a person who relies heavily on the MC, only because of his strength, and his now sisters social status (Lu Ling was taken away by a strong sect from the plains). And then theres the Liu family. They are easy to hate, and only hate. They are also reliant on the MC. When their family was forced to leave their city, they had taken shelter in another place, without any money. The MC conjoured up a method to gain money, allowing the Liu family to live their once lavish lives. But, they want to steal the method so that they can keep ****** money. Also, if the owner of the place theyre staying at wants to annex them, they plan to put the blame on the MC. They have done more things to make them unlikeable. This has gone on too long, so read at your own discretion.
I like it. It is the only story that I have ever given any gifts. I would recommend it to everyone. I have read everything that isn't privilege.
So many grammar mistakes. The story itself is good but the writing takes all the positives away from it. Definitely try to cure this. Other than that the story and characters are good and I like the development. I still enjoy reading this a lot.
truthfully the people in this novel are straight up annoying and i would love to bash them and tell them to scram, i mean why the hell are u guys coming to his house as if its your? i hate them. and they are shameless to the core if only these few annoying people can be removed then it can be really awesome. on the other hand the novel is alright apart from the above mentioned problems and it's an enjoyable read so far.
I think the author is just trying to tell us, he has daddy issues through this novel????. .................................................................................................,..
I don't Evan know what to say becaus I have never done a review before nor have I Even read these book I am literally only doing this for exp but unlike those over exp wana be's I am a true elder of the exp sect for when I go for exp through typing comments or reviews atleast I make it intresting instead of just typing exp and if you are still reading this than I would like to thank you for your time and remember these wise words. there is allways time to read, just do it before you go to sleep
to be honest at first I liked the concept of the story. a story about a main character that can upgrade his skills but limited by his skill slots sounded really attractive to me. but all that changed when the story started it's world tournament arc (chapter 480-600) it became nationalistic. because I really wanted to know his 9th skill or pet choice I persisted through and read up to chapter 591 (mtl) before deciding to stop reading . my advice is if you don't like chinese nationalism don't read this dumpster fire of a novel
Well, shameless author here!!! This story is about a guy that is reincarnated in DC comics world, he will grow from a wimp to an OP MC, this isn't going to be overnight, he is going to work hard for it. I guess that is all i have to say at the moment and i hope you like it.:)
The author and logic are like water and oil 1. Where did MC get shorts? 2. Where did MC get googles? 3. why can the girl get a point of vitality from casual relaxed swimming? 4. How on earth can a social person and an expert in prno don't recognize a bra?And this is only beginning.
This is pure garbage. Traslation quality is garbage... Mc is garbage... Love interest is garbage... Everything is garbage! Don't bother with this...
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