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Great story. Any hint u can give on the romance/harem? Also, will the MC always be solo or will he start his own faction? I love when MC actually has their own power base - it makes more sense in the game as well rather than doing everything solo, but up 2 u.
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So good! I love thw soft hearted hero and his little sister. They make the perfect duo in learning how to play a traditionally kill or be killed game in a non-violent manner!
Even through it s the first chapter but really great If the author keep s going at this rate and incrises the updating speed than i am going to become a fan of him
Author Note: I am writing as a hobby but I tried to do things professionally. Although I need to work on my grammar more, my story is still readable and written in detail. I rate my review Writing Quality 3 stars because it is only average writing quality with quite a lot grammar mistakes. However, if I'm a person that just curing from dyslexia could read the novel without much difficulty, I'm sure other won't have it hard to read the story either.My grammar needs improvement but I don’t have a teacher to teach me, so I don’t mind it if you rate me badly because of my grammar since I understand that it’s important for the reader to read the novel. Just don’t expect for it to get any better if you don’t plan on helping me. Like I say, I don’t have a teacher to teach me grammar. I couldn’t see the mistake when I’m writing and re-reading so, you cannot hope for too much. Stability of Updates, I must rate it 5 stars because 1 chapter a day and if there are a lot chapters in stock I will update 2-5 chapter on Sunday or sometimes on Saturday too. Its depend on my mood, really but it can never be lower than one chapter a day. So, I must say that it is as stable as translator translating an available novel.Story Development 4 stars. Don't ask me why. I just liked how my story is developing. Why it lack one more star? Because it is not quite detail enough unlike professional novels.Character design 4 stars. I love my characters, naturally 4 stars. Why it lack one more star? Similar to the above, it is not quite detail enough but in the future, I will improve on this surely.World Background 4 Stars. No reason, just 4 stars.Source of inspiration: Library of Heaven Path, History's Number 1 Founder, Tales of Demons and GodsDisclaimer: I don't have the basic knowledge of Xianxia so do forgive me for that. I only know Xianxia from reading novels so my knowledge can be lacking. However, it is a certain that this novel is more of Xuanhuan than Xianxia. That novel cover, I owned it. I'm the one that created it.Warning: It is Yaoi. If you don’t like Yaoi, you can still read because I think that some Xianxia and Xuanhuan have acceptable BL moment too. If there is NSFW scene I will warn beforehand. There will be a rate for Yaoi moment. One star to five stars. If it is too explicit, I will rate it five stars, if it just both men being naked but did nothing, I will rate it one star. If you hate Yaoi, then please, I’m politely escorting you out of my novel. Don’t ruin the review just because you hate Yaoi.You may ask whatever you want to ask in this review but make sure to be polite to everyone.
This novel is more like a Diary of events rather than a story. It starts off with the MC already having experienced reincarnation, evaluation, and expedition into danger. You are dropped into him just finishing his venture into a demon forest only to have him go back into another a chapter later. All the standard problems that would usually take 20 to 50 chapters had been condensed down into quite literally 2 to 4 chapters.by chapter 5 I was already questioning why I was reading this. Although the premise is good and the quality of the story isn't subpar you are basically given no character interaction outside of major events.At 16 chapters in I still barely feel like I know this MC. So much is glossed over apparently 2 to 3 months passed in the story but I've only seen a couple of days worth of events tbh.The week long CD for his ability doesn't feel like a burden at all since he doesn't experience anything outside of it being on CD apparently. He makes money like it's nobody's business and survives dangerous encounters like they were a water balloon thrown by a toddler
I actually had fun reading your novel Author~Chan! Everything was got my mood swinging.
I enjoy this novel but i have no hope for it after all the raw only has 65 chapters and it was last updated 3 months ago
Let's begin with the grammar. No mistakes so far other than the confusing dialogue phrases, sometimes they end up becoming too confusing to understand and sometimes I even mistake the speechs thinking they were thoughts. Well, for me the biggest problem of this novel is in its pacing and lack of description. The story is moving way too fast at least for me, and even now I still don't know how Hade exactly looks and even the MC doesn't escape this thing. Due to the lack of description, the only characters that actually marked me were the dragon and the swordsman, other than that I can't say much about the others. For the good points, I really liked how descriptive you were about the MC's feelings, the sensation, the process... They were superb and I could easily imagine myself onto the MC's shoes. I would just recommend you to change some things while focusing more on the world building.
Love it keep it up....................................................................................................................................
love the story, pretty funny, also love the mc keep it up. hope you update soon, because your just legend among author's that I've seen so far. have a nice day, week or month and happy early birthday??