first of all I want to say that I enjoy your novel, I like the Mc kindhearted nature that being said I have a few issues that you might want to address ?. 1) despite mc previous knowledge being that he went to college and all even if he didn't study it his lack of common sense is terrible, I mean who makes some national tier potion and sells it dirt cheap. He didn't think about his unique background being the son of a goddess having an effect on everything he does, yes its kind and nice to give away these OP potions but think about all the alchemist that slave away trying to make a decent potion to earn a living and mc comes and destroyed all their hard work. Usually alchemy is a hard profession and people face many failures but mc has no such problems so what happens when in town A you worked hard to make a low grade potions and sell them for 8 copper but you hear a rumor that town B has a godlike potion being sold for the same price, I don't need to spell it out, yes it kind of him to do so, but his kindness is hurting others business and livelihood. 2) Power scale is weird, Idk how mc struggle against the goblin king and ran out of mana I get he is back to being 12 and all and he new to this world but I would imagine having all the mana should amount to some insane strength not to mention his previous knowledge as even the goddess said he'll be stronger than others; and the spider queen being 600 years old she should be a godlike existence maybe not as strong a dragon or other races in the same tier as her but she should definitely wipe out enemies like flies other than her contemporaries
This book changed my life. I am so honored to be blessed by the pure knowledge and brilliance of this book. It is truly genius how you weaved togeather bread and isaeki so wonderfully. Maybe, the true bread was the friends we made along the way. I truly recommend to everyone who can see this. Read this whole book, support the artistic genius of this author.
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
easy to read, intriguing world mysteries, interesting game world with its own separate (?) mysteries, funny and heartwarming character moments
I have only read 6 chapters so far, but I can already tell in time that this could possibly be a great novel.
The writing quality is great (which is very surprising as a person who usually browses new novels) and honestly that's good enough for me to add it to my library.
Hey author, hope you continue to develop this story and it becomes a banger.
Read the MTL, this novel is unfortunately dropped. Read the MTL, this novel is unfortunately dropped. Read the MTL, this novel is unfortunately dropped.
I saw a few reviews where the reviewers say that author didn't get the genders right.
That's not true at all. Author actually nailed the genders all the time(I don't know why do you need to make such a big fuss even if he accidentally made a typo once or twice). Also MC is not a simp or a slave. I don't even know where did that come from? MC only acts subservient towards his master due to the system, but he's not a simp at all. I made this review in order to balance the ratings.
I like so would you READ OT then you will see how good it is................................................................................
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
I like the story overall. It is very interesting and it certainly stands out in it's style. To each their own, the way that the story is described reminds me of some kind of strategy game. The levels and the way that people's power abilities are described throws me off. It's not really what I look for when reading a novel and makes it a bit less entertaining to me.
But to each their own because a lot of people seem to love it and uniqueness always has its merits. I think the writing quality could use a few minor improvements along with the formatting. But a solid story overall. Wishing the author the best.
I like where it is going. I think the MC is a more paranoid than he should be after the bots are given by system so at least it should be fine for letting them do things on there own. Anyway I like the way you write and how the story progress. A bit of erotic and a bit of plot makes all the story more interesting.........Keep it up........ Author you have my support and best wishes.
I dis this to balance out the unfair low star reviews with no decent explanation.
I am kind afterall.
Just keep going and don't listen to those guys, ok?