Don’t mean to sound harsh but going to put this review up anyway.
Straight off the bat from opening this novel page the synopsis is littered with grammar errors that don’t take much effort to fix, this makes me want to read the novel less and does not give me the impression the author puts effort into the novel.
After looking through the synopsis I straight away looked through the comments to find people with similar opinions to me.
I managed to find one stating that the novel contained a lot of spelling mistakes which I will also assume also meant grammatical errors. After reading this comment and seeing the reply back from the author which contained a message with the reply saying they he/she will review past chapters in a sartirical manner and also said that they did not find any spelling mistakes. This would be agreeable and I would have found no trouble with it if the synopsis was not in the state it was.
After reading this comment I thought if he/she could confidently state there was no spelling mistakes in the chapters then that would mean he had read through them and double checked, which means he/she overlooked the grammar mistakes and made me make this comment out of boredom.
I realise no everyone has the time to overlook their work but it just degrades it and stops new visitors from opening and reading what I’m sure is a good read all problems aside.
Sorry if you don’t agree with this comment but had to put it up out of nessasity. Also thanks author for taking the time to make a novel in the first place.
Honestly this novel is so good. I love the romance genre and I was looking for some new non harem r 18 novels and I found this. I started reading this at like 9 pm and I couldn’t stop reading until I reached the end. So here I am currently writing a review at 12:33 am. Anyway if anybody reads this you guys should really give this book a try it’s really amazing. I have no complaints
Yet another reincarnated MC who is an idiot, plot holes everywhere, Super powerful one minute and pathetically weak the next.
O my stars! This is such an unexpected gem! And it' complete... awesome work author-San :)
Only the world back ground gets a slightly lower rating... but that's understandably cuz of the novel length...
This is a great story I definitely recommend
it's the first story I've ever read so in my opinion it's better than most other apps this is my first review too so tell me if I do good ..
I like the personality of the mc (not caring about anything but cultivation)
I could only get in a couple a chapters before i had to stop. Alot of inconsistencies and the name of his helper just kinda killed it for me. Maybe it gets better but i had to stop before that.
Honestly his name is so irritating it’s just so not german name otherwise really good story
Firstly, I Just want to say that this is a cultivation novel, so the bar is already low.
Here is my review:
Not bad but it doesnt lives up to hype. Mc survives a lot of near death experiences using his system. But that would mean he was going to die without the system and his prior knowledge. Then how did the Main character in his book survive? We are told that he is reincarnated in his own book yet he just has some general knowledge and thats about it. If this was a normal 'reborn in past' story, it would be exacly same. He acts like this isnt even his own book. He literaly has too many ways to escape the bad events yet he doesnt.
where did you go please finish such a nice twist compared to the usual
There is so much not going on it’s crazy. 80% system rewards seems low and the overall world building does not give you any reason to root for the MC. After 20 chapters, I was rooting for a guard.