Its good. I like the characters so far. I personally like stories where mc is a movie actor because I like reading about the films’ stories since they’re like most synopsis—short, but interesting. However, there are many pronoun mixups some make me uncertain who the pronoun refers to because if it is true it seems out of character.Other than that, so far the synopsis gives a pretty good idea what the story is going to be about.
I like this story and its characters, the description of the world could use some work, but otherwise from that this story is pretty good in my opinion. Thumbs up to you author.
A great novel that was given up on too early. It seemed like the author listened to readers comments a bit too much and went back and rewrote chapters which changed future paths he had already visualized. While it's good to learn from mistakes and try to make fans happy, don't ever let them change your novel midway through. This will change the way the author writes the rest of the novel even if it's subconsciously, which in this case seemed to wilt his enthusiasm for this one, which ended up causing it to get dropped suddenly. Don't get me wrong, I enjoy White Online, but my personal opinion and a few of my buddies who've read both agree that Martial Arts Master was overall a better read and had even greater potential if it wasn't dropped. I hope that someday in the future the author either continues on, or rewrites the novel and does what he imagines without other's changing his views. Either way, I'm enjoying the reread I'm doing.
This is similar to Astral Pet Store, except no system (there's a stat screen though), no fighting (so far), and the MC is actually able to sell pets (isn't that wonderful?).
The MC is a poor store owner who took over the shop at the age of 8 and taking care of his 6 year old sister. He raised her after their parents died and they developed a close relationship. Since the sister is talented, he struggles to make ends meet while also saving up to send her to school.
He's a transmigrator who brought a special type of fey, pet, with him from his previous life but hasn't awakened until now. This is where he gets his MC exclusive cheat to improve his and his sister's life. This is where he unlocks his abilities to boost fey's abilities and evolve them into the next rank among other things.
There doesn't seem to be much fighting so far, since he has an attribute for healing, support, and plant type fey it's most likely going to go down the store owner route rather than adventurous type of novel. That said, MC's probably still going to get into fights and explore dangerous areas later on anyways.
It's a good novel for those who like novels like store owner type novels and summoner/pet novels.
I think the story is just not that interesting compared to others from the same genre the man was a king but his character is just like any average person also through the chapters he plays just a supporting role and instead of trying to improve himself and widen his view about the supposly different world to improve his acting he focuses in helping the formal female friend of the dead guy but the writing is consistent and that's an advantage at least but the characters are cringey to me especially the rich female girl that suddenly pooped out and saw something interesting in Mc without any prober reason just for the plot
Hi Everyone,
Can someone tell me from which chapter the NTR starts and the MC starts to loose his harem?
thank you so much for the information.
tbh this story had potential but the author doesn't utilise it.
the characters are good but again author doesn't know to utilise it.
author doesn't even know what to do with this story, it's not slice of life or anything. it's just boring and the story goes NO WHERE. overall please don't pick this up thinking it is good like me, I have suffered from this story.
If you like novels with op and cautious Mc and settings revolving around the comedic situations happening around him, this novel is perfect for you. I have read around 300+ chp in mtl and it has been a solid 5 star for me till now. Good plot development riddled with conspiracies in each volume only makes it better. Also there are no annoying cliches like arrogant young master or face slapping as whoever he meet respects him due to his godly looks/temperement alone let alone strength.
LISTEN AUTHOR ---- IF YOU ARE WRITING THE NOVEL ,.JUST DON'T DROP THE NOVEL OK JUST DON'T DROP OR ELSE HEAVEN WILL FALL IN YOU !!!!! MARK MY WORDS.......
One of my four recommended read and hopefully it goes through the trial read. Very much cliche story, but still interesting enough to keep on going. MC has the ability to upgrade any skill twice a day. Since he has future knowledge; he would be able to gather top skills and would be able to upgrade them. Definitely one of the top three on my four recommended read in the trial read.
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While the story is held back by strange word choice, minor plot holes, clunky dialogue and foreshadowing that makes no sense until the pay off, The grammar is good for the most part, the characters are unique and the general premise of the story is good. One of the better web stories I've read in a while.