Locked ch 4 and up = instant delete from library good book but until they stop being stupid... (delete)...........................................................................................
A pretty great novel. It has a solid character design and no young masters. A great world and great support characters. The mc is also smart. A great read.
Moody, thought-provoking, sad and true to life. A tightly written and fast moving novel. I hope to see more from the character of Jain in the future.
You're a staring my eyes the I feel in love with it from the very 1st line it's pure and original I hope you dig deep making it breath taking
From what i've read (chapter 9 50%)The general writing and story is quite decent but lacks a few components to really enjoy the novel. That being the fantasy part. It lacks core systems that Are logical and easy to understand such AS instead of might use strength or spirit damage to magic damage also in the world you have set up i see it hard for the character to find trials where theyGet stronger, more information Lore, character development. I see they have quest via the system so this might change but Even then it would lack some small components I think if you add magical realism with a good magic or aura system it would make the story more enjoyable for the reader.
Nah man, the Yuri harem was a complete turn off ,if it hadn't goes that way all harem readers would read this novel and it would be successful . but sadly some authors fetishes prevent it.
I don't know how a person can be ok when his women are kissing and getting pleasure from another woman when he's not present. weirdest fetishe ever.
thats why not many harem readers continue reading this story .
So here I was enjoying this book when all of a sudden the author ended it on the most annoying cliffhanger ever! However it is a good read so I encourage people to read it and bully author-Chan to hurry up and write more. For the readers sanity.....(and author-chans safety). Before he gets kidnapped and forced to write more
I'm enjoying the novel so far. Pet novels happen to be a favorite of mine at this point in time. I hope you will continue to write and update!
One of those gets pulled into a different world by a system novels, but even though they are in a completely different world the nationalism/racism can't help but creep in. Your standard if you aren't Han Chinese you aren't good...even though it's a different world and the idea that this random people who look the same would actually be the same makes zero sense.
Please support this one...................................................................................................................................
I like the world so far as though it contains a few cliche elements it is combined in a way and with new ideas that make for an interesting setting and is probably the novel's strongest point.
The characters so far have been pretty interesting though outside of a few core characters that are pretty interesting the side characters could be helped by being more distinct.
So far the story is good. I wouldn't say amazing as hasn't gone anywhere deep so far, but good enough to keep me interested in how it will continue with some romance and actions. I would like to get some more intrigue and discovery related to MC, his ancestor etc blended with some story progression to elevate the story to a higher level.
Now as for the only major downside is the writing quality. I suspect this is a translation rather than original work in English and pronouns are just an absolute mess. No he just him/her get messed up, but even those get messed up with I not infrequently which is a whole other level beyond even what I'm used to from rushed translations. It is even to the point where it can be distracting as I have to re-read paragraphs to figure out which pronouns were meant to be used to understand what the paragraph was supposed to mean.