pls if you plan to make a new zombie novel in future, then could you make it like, where mc either play solo or is kind of indifferent and cold and only care about himself and no one else. He may have goal like survive, become strong or become god or something, ...........maybe one day. Well i just want to see a dark novel with strong mc and with a zombie setting where betrayal , killing, backstabbing .. ....should be kind of normal if you are weak. Like Survival of fittest or strong and weak meat or something like that. Even though i didn't like much but still your story is great, so keep up good work.
We really need mooaaaaaaarr of this please do something we can't even vote for it because it is not the editor's choice what can we do to continue reading this?????
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If you've read Battle Through The Heavens and want a similar experience, then Martial Universe is for you. Starting from an insignificant clan, coming across a treasure with a spirit inside who helps the MC quickly increase his cultivation, competition arc every corner, progressing from one small town to a greater region and finally at the peak of the world.
Although there ARE just as many cultivation levels as BTTH, it's not as broken. The first 3/5th of the story may feel repetitive; cultivating, competition arc, treasure hunting with some plot development in between. However, the real fun starts after that. The events prior may as well be considered as a foundation for MC's character and cultivation. The latter part of the story is what's great about this novel. Much action, heart wrenching feels, and true anticipation for what's going to happen is what makes the latter part different.
Another part that I personally liked was that most characters (not just MC and his group), whether from the beginning or from the middle of the story, has actual roles in the latter part of the story. If kinda feels nice when everything connects at the end. Also, there's a small cameo of Xiao Yan from BTTH at the very end of the story. (Irrelevant Spoiler: Both MCs travel to the same universe at the end.)
This is utter trash with dumb mc....
I don't even know what to comment anymore
Great novel to read. Translation quality is good,story development is great. Great concept in the novel.
Come on guys lets make this novel official. I want to see what happens next how the story twists and turns. And I want to see what his status would be finally.
Some novels deserve a second review after we've read enough chapters to form a solid opinion on it, and Wargrounds deserves that attention.
Aa I've said before, MMORPG stories are a dime a dozen here on WN, but SilentMild's story differs from the pack quite obviously because of the interesting way the story is progressing. Allow me to point them out:
The protaginist, Al, isn't your typical can-do-all character, even with his all-powerful A.I. He's genuinely trying to better himself. If he had one glaring flaw, it's his inability to seal the deal with his love interest.
The supporting characters are equally interesting. For example, Poppabear starts out as your 'Leeroy Jenkins' in the starting chapters but grows as a team player in the latter chapters even though he still retains his crazy charge tendencies. The other characters, Sophia, Osho, Solomon, Patric, etc aren't flat characters who conform to just one typical stereotype. Also, there are interesting people like Cyber Husky out there. Lol
The writing improves dramatically over the course of 50+ chapters, and you can clearly see the author's genuine desire to provide quality content to his readers because he is trying to improve his work constantly. I've nagged him tons in the first few chapters on proper grammar and he's been diligently editing it to make the writing smoother.
The world of Wargrounds so far is interesting too, changing from a Fortnite style game to an openworld reminiscent of WOW. Visually simple yet interesting enough to want to read about. And i hear there's going to be a _______ type competition in the future!
If I have one complaint, it's that I don't see an actual villian in the story other than the Y__________ but there doesn't seem to be a connection to our protagonist...
Well done on this work and I really hope you keep it up, Author! I'm rooting for you.
Great story, recommend you try it.
Although I wish he would give out some more powers and just let them keep the healing powers especially, even if he's not guiding them...
I'm such a fan of this series. The first part had me guessing the whole time, and I was still wrong. Just the right amount of noir detective mixed with sci fi and some cool supernatural aspects. I can't wait for the next adventure!
Though, not a fan of idols type of novels, I took my time to read the available chapters of your work.
Firstly, the quality of your writing. I think your writing is good. Good grammar, tenses and phrases. Only minor errors which I've pointed out in the comments.
Secondly, the rate of updates. This is excellent so far.
Thirdly, the nature of your characters. I believe you understand the logic behind character formation and development. Your MC is of great character, even the side characters are all good. Well eritten characters.
Fourthly, story line. Right from chapter one, your story is progressing well. From the MC in a new environment to the beginning of his role in his new environment. Steady and focus storyline.
And lastly, the world building. Though, I'm not a fan of this world, it's well written. The little of the world I've read is a proof of that.
Keep up the good work.
Shallow characters and cliche, even shallower, plot. This novel is one of those novels that require you to turn your brain off in order to enjoy it. However, even then I couldn’t help but sigh or roll my eyes with some developments in the story. If you want a fun, easy read then this is probably not for you. If you want to read a trashy, typical, low-quality Xianxia then this is gonna he perfect for you.I should mention that the writing quality is really good and effort has clearly been put into the formatting.
Fuq why do you even post thesr novels when you won't pick them. It's a fuqinng torture bro. Getting into the story then suddenly not continuing it. Fuqq! Please pick all good books in trial reads
Mediocre novel. The simulations are interesting, but the real life part of the novel has so many problems. The author really dropped the ball.