Jmitch1
Hi guys, this author review is around chapter 190 and I would like to say a few things.
1. A big THANK YOU to all of my readers, and for all of you who are rooting after Elliot, Jennifer, Jessica, Jessica, Wu Kong and Jules! I have a ton more surprises in store, it'll be a great ride ahead!
*spoiler ahead*
2. To all my potential readers/supporters. All of the characters around the MC will be pretty strong, so don't worry too much about him having "baggage".
3. His two sisters are going to be epic down the line, so don't worry about that either.
4. There are races in this novel, but it will mostly deal with the beast system in the beginning. So don't expect to read about racing until around chapter 80.
5. My discord server has pictures and inspirations in it so you can have a richer reading experience. Do consider joining it! :D
Overall, I think this is a fun LIGHT novel to read. I apologize if there are slight mistakes and slight plotholes, I am very open to questions and discussion, so feel free to drop your comments!
Do try to give this novel a chance if you're thinking of reading it. Thank you!! :D
I hope the author writes more novels like this. It's a light hearted wholesome book. I personally don't like novels that are overly romantic or about detailed violence and crime.
I felt the story like really happening in front of my eyes the way he described about his feelings towards her is very nice
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this is a really nice book and everybody should read it. it is great it is great it is great it is great it is great it is great it is great
One of the best novels I've read in a while. Excellent world building and character development. I binge read the entire thing, and I can't wait for more!
I have to say. in just 3 chapters I was hooked. After reading all 10 I'm obsessed. please please please come back to this story. I didn't know I needed this in my life but now I'm in love with the story.
Dropped within first 15 chapters. MC is blackmailed by a person saying he is from A terrorist grouping and will turn him in if he doesn’t follow his commands. The thing is MC is not so why would he just go along with it.An example would be a random person on the street walks up too you and says your a terrorist give me all your money or I will report you. Are you just going to give it too him? No you tell him to F off.
This is nice try to auther.I shure this book can give super experience for readers.This book has amazing story it can win my heart place❤️... It is historical story .. it has true insidenses.. good luck for this book..?
NOTHING IS CONFIRMED, SO AS TO SAY THIS IS JUST THE START. THEN WHY ARE THERE AN EMPEROR/SAGE CULTIVATION AT THE START ?TOTAL SCORE ... 3.0
I love this story all you need is to improve grammar, update speed, and story development along with other things. Tbh, I'm not that good at writing either and I'm not saying your not good. You are actually the first person's novel I really enjoy. Keep up the good work and train harder....
The plot was interesting so I was expectant. Didn't expect that as soon as the missions began, the development of the story would be very awkward, or should I say forced. I stopped reading at exactly chapter 10.
11th time my review has been taken down be warned this novel's mc gets cucked by his girlfriend them gets cucked afterwards by his next nurse girlfriend along with it being super nationalist racist and deleting any negative reviews it's a ****ty novel way to go qidian for bringing in this trash no one likes except for some cucks
