In fact, for now I like the novel ... In short, it lacks a bit of grammar and has some errors (not as much as others I've seen, MY EYES ARE LOST ALMOST!) I think if you fix it and focus a little more outside the MC, also if you post more often haha all great (even if the latter is not necessary) thanks and excellent work.
Hope you continue to translate the story.
It see to have a really good story line. The main character seams well rounded and well thought out. I hope his powers progress and he looks after the little girl.
a big lack of coherence, I would have believed the story of a 15/18 year old kid but the kid is 5 years old it is unthinkable that the matech would happen like this it was a league match ^^ the author would have skipped it childhood or change the age of the child.
I love fantasy and the involvement of fairies and elves and royalties. I know it's kind of cliché since it has been quiet so many years since fairytales have been around but somehow, I am entertained by this story. It's a classical story for me but it's still good. Hope to read it to its end.
Thank you for your hard effort in creating this beautiful novel :D I think that this must have taken a ton of time to create so i really wanna show my dedication by leaving this review on this final piece of art
Y'all don't ask me any questions but just go read Chapter 163 c'mon I won't wanna waste my coin on that stuff.
It seems like some sort of spirit owned our dear writer, it's crazy, if you've been following this book, you'll notice the red lights as well.
I love this savage version of the author, Keep it up
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amazing, the revenge is the plot so difficult. but you can written this story.. so i will give you big applaus..
semangat terus ya kak.. semoga bisa jadi pemenang.
I love the story. Yuri chased a lot of people away. Even if I don't like it too, I still enjoy the thrilling parts of an overpowered Mc novel.*currently in chapter 125.
Sounds like Cov 6.
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