Jmitch1
Why choose this novel?? The author is going hiatusAnd the update is absolutely unstableAnd why i give 5* ? It's supposed to be 3 starsThe adventures are boring, the setting is similar to Monster Paradise and Super God GeneBtw before you Sun of The Beach said i give review before i read, let me tell you, i always read the free trial on original web before voting
A translation mess where ascending the Heavens is easier than finding this novels plot.
I read 13 chapters, my head boiled. The author simply jumps from one event to another, without thinking about the details, he does it so stupidly that it even seems funny. Collecting all my reading experience, I can say that if the author at the very beginning simply ignores the details or forgets about them, it will only get worse. It rarely happens otherwise. I will not read further, and of course the score is up to chapter 13, and not the whole novel, but 13 chapters were enough for me. The main character is ridiculous and absurd, his problem is described as superficially as possible, it is not clear what the author actually means, there is only a description in the title, there is no other and will not be for a long time, as it seems to me. The world is big, but again, who is so interested in this? Definitely not a mc. And most importantly, his methods of solving the problem, the author thinks that it is funny and easy to read, but no, this is stupidity and absurdity, without details it also offends the intellect of the reader. If you are 13 years old and you are ready to read the work of your peer, I think you will have no problems with this work_ ..
This novel is actually retarded, in only the first hundred chapters I read there has already been some stupid as sh*t things that would happen. Sure, I wouldn't mind if the main character had only made the mistake once and tried not to do it again, but no, the mc actually has f*cking brain damage and mental retardation as it seems that he does not learn from all the sh*t that could have been avoided but wasn't because he is goddamn stupid.Other than this, the repetitiveness of the main character making an impression on the women is irritating too. Basically, they have a bad impression of MC, then MC does some sh*t, then viola! Women like MCSomething even more annoying and retarded is the fact that the MC goes retarded over anything that even bears little resemblance to his master. This wasn't actually that bad, but this was the last straw for me because honestly, the MC was just too retarded. The MC had actually "fallen in love" with this random woman that he currently does not know, and does not have any connection with, just because this cultivator woman had saved him, and the way she did resembled the way his master saved him.At this point, I gave a big "What The F*ck?" Yes, I did, because it was f*cking retarded. I would have understood and even be more interested if the MC had fallen in love due to some other bullsh*t reason that could even have some logical reasoning like his master's reincarnation, or even anything that would just sound logical.But sadly, it disappoints read that it wasn't so. As such, I think this novel is retarded, but that's just my preference, so if after this you still want to read it, then just do so, don't say I didn't warn you.
Author shamelessly promoting and reviewing own novel, giving myself 5*. It constitutes a promise to myself, and readers, that I will update regularly, and not drop the novel. Characters will grow and world isn't that unique as is based on current Earth. To some extent. Names have been changed, of course to give that ethereal feel. ?There will be elements of romance (a huge part), revenge (another aspect) but mostly, it will deal with the MC growing up and life experiences. Other characters will also have their "life
It's an excellent novel and I am hoping that author picks it back up ( considering it isn't dropped).I was really bored for a while before I stumbled on this novel. It has its own unique perspective character and world design. It's worth the time....only downside is that I have no clue if it will be continued or we will be left hanging here o-o)/ author San comon pick it up.
Keep it up author and don’t give up midway!!! 140 characters
Awesome fanfic of journey to the west.more moremoremore more more more more more more Awesome fanfic of journey to the west.more moremoremore more more more more more more
English needs to be improved. It's the only thing that's keeping me from giving this story a perfect score. Characters are well fleshed out. It's easy to fall in love with the protagonist Jun Hua, whether as herself or her male alter-ego, Jun Min. Reading is like watching bishounen anime, with a full dose of heroic beautiful men. Lots of action, intrigue, humor, and romance. Thankfully the writing has enough flow and sense, despite the poor grammar, to be understood. The plot itself is worth plodding through the grammar bombs. I hope Author Sorahana will find an editor to polish this novel, as it has great potential.
Can we get the Clever protagonist tag removed? The main character is an idiot and ends up having to use a super power just to have a single clever thought. Has turned into a really boring 'horror' novel.
why you should read this ...1) The mc is smart and Op ..2) Mc maintain good relationship with powerful NPC (non-player character)3) great character development 4)........
Great storyline but a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes. Sometimes the sentences doesn’t add up and/or doesn’t make much sense.
