The first arc is really good, MC shows great leadership skills, leading a bunch of mortals to clear an asylum full of demons in the impossible level difficult.But then, the author destroyed this novel in the next 10 chapters. The MC needs a medallion to enter an order of knights to recover his missing eye and arm. He finds a woman who is selling the medallion for 1000 coins, that's the amount of her debt with loan sharks. He pays her debt but is afraid of asking for the medallion to not upset her. Then he gives a blank check to corrupt city guards, just for them not make things difficult for him.The woman he saves, who lives in the slums, who divides a room with 4 people, including a dead rotten body, who would become a slave together with her daughter, gets angry at the MC because he follows her, to make sure she gets home in safety, cause she's a widow and her reputation could suffer (he still had no courage to ask for the medallion).Seeing her living conditions, the MC picks his remaining money e gives to her, so she can find a better house to liveSo the badass rich MC of the last arc now has no money, no balls, no medallion e needs to find a job to survive.
The MC is no different than a side character, strong possibility of powers for great development but always remain quiet in the corner with no goals and no ambition and no leadership... this story has a change of a good development but it's wasted I kept on reading waiting to a turn for the better but I just got worst!!!! If you wanna read this be ready to waste time in the long run
I think it is high time I review Myriad Island...but what will I say?This novel mostly revolves around Elias who finds peace after escaping his Past. Sadly after things seem to flow in a good way for him, he was swallowed by Space and found himself in another World... and he was forced to fight to survive.Well, the concept is not new, but that was about almost all novels, but the purpose and the flow of things are unique, Fresh out of Celestial Mind!It contained depth and Lore that will be unravelled gradually as we go deep into the story. If you have any...?... you can ask them here!
Could you review the novel and fix the grammar please, there are many parts that come out complete paragraphs in capital letters that are uncoordinated, just as there are misspelled sentences and misspelled words that have their logic but being poorly written takes away the desire to continue reading , I hope the best to continue reading.
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i love this novel,great humour,great side characters and a nice cold blooded and sophisticated mc. i do have some questions i hope can be answered it appears mc has the ability to copy peoples powers(or even his own like 'vexing gaze')but cannot use it freely it seems? some conditions need to be met. i can understand in terms of others ability but why impose such restrictions on his own i wonder. what is the mc's class and power level mc does not take any active measures to increase his strength. does it increase passively or does it increase based on the strength of guild invictus?i love the overall story its a great joy to find a protagonist who does not fall to the usual chiche though i do hope that in future chapters author would shed light on the world and its power systems in detail. what happened to the previous tycon? did he die? sigh. i would be most thankful if my queries are answered, thank you.
Thanks for the one who writes this story....it's good that I find such interesting and full of adventure story,I read it like there's no tomorrow for it's fun,like the characters so much.. Just waiting for more updates!!!
Nice story so far..?????????good luck,and more chapter ahead ?????????????????????❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️????☺️☺️☺️...
MPE is one of my all-time favorites and I'm sure that you can expect something great when it is the result of his hardwork. Please don't make it too short like MPE though, although the epilogue made me cry, many of the MC's pet in your last novel is underused.
I dont know, feels a bit overcomplicated, can't bring myself to continue. Maybe it'll get better after the 40th chapter but so far, it doesn't do anything for me