... ... ... Dude. My eyes are aching. I was intrigued by that one bad grammar review and nasty responses to it, and a truckload if 5* reviews... So, I've decided to give it a spin, but, in all honesty, looks like machine translation that was left unatended. Just the first chapter gangbanged my poor eyes without a lube. I don't have anything against people trying their hand on the art of writing, but I think you should at the very least respect your readers with some quality. As it seems, a lot of people are trying to support your story, why don't you ask someone to proofread and/or edit it for you? The 1* comes from writing quality, the rest is at it too just to not falsely boost the value, as I think the story itsekf can't be so vad if people git yoyr back.
This is a good series, But the overall story is kind of bland and the progression in this series is kind of slow.
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I actually really like this book. I think the author has teally thought out the background and the characters, but I must say that I wish the author would get an editor for the grammatical errors (such as using “sense” where the word “since” should be used). However, I am still able to enjoy reading the storyline.
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Structural Improvements,it takes baby steps to reach big steps. Work on capitalizing your sentences, ie, dialogue."He stood, staring into the empty room known as the abyss room. He wondered if he could ever see the light of day after being trapped here for a century."That's a example I came up with in less than a minute, theres some mistakes but its generally what you want to aim for in your next chapters. Description and details need to also be improved upon.
Truly a good read for those who like the mc waking as a video game character and working his way up. When i get enough fast passes I'll do my best to read it all
Great novel, it make me sad that it won't be chosen till god know when :-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):,-):,-):,-):,-):,-):,-)
Hmm, I am really invested in this story. The MC is actually smart and witty who just doesn't blindly trust anyone. The world feels so large, world building is amazing, characters are amazing and I can't wait to read what happens next
Okay so let me just say—Si Yueyue is hands down one of the funniest transmigrator protagonists I've ever come across, and I'm not even being sarcastic. Most isekai girls wake up in palaces or as rich heiresses, right? And then there's Yueyue, who transmigrates into a postpartum woman in a rural brigade and her biggest existential crisis is whether she can wash her hair. The contrast is absolutely hilarious. But here's the thing that actually got to me—her internal monologue during that bath scene. "This past month has been sheer torment." She's dealing with breastfeeding in front of her mother-in-law and sister-in-law, covering herself with a cloth like it's some kind of scandal, and she's just mentally comparing her life to other transmigrators. The humor is there, sure, but underneath it you can feel how lonely and disoriented she must be. She's trapped in a body she's still getting used to, in a family where she's technically family but also somehow an outsider. What I love is how the family treats her. Zhang Guihua is so warm and practical—boiling water for her bath without being asked, calling her a clean freak with affection. Grandma Zhao notices her shyness but doesn't push. Lei Dashu, the patriarch, just quietly supports everything. They don't treat her like she's strange or different, even though she clearly is. That's the real relationship magic here—she's slowly becoming part of this family not through grand gestures but through these tiny, domestic moments of acceptance. And Lei Jun? The guy who saved the best seat on the cart for his wife without even thinking about it? I'm not crying, you're crying.
Really happy bout a new novel by my favorite Asian author but I have mixed feels bout that TL. Mentioning Demon's Diary but it's barely updated! One of the most popular series imo and not being put up to show it's true potential. This makes me insecure bout the TL even though the history and quality of GGP's works are high. How will time be split will one drop as the other get popular? Don't know anything about the story so but I'm optimistic. My 3stars are because of my mixed feeling due to the translators past (and ongoing) disappointments regarding upload of novels.
Cant wait for more chapters to appear this is going to be one hell of a ride.............. Thank you Author for making the second book lol im hella excited