Amazing! Very original. Love the blend of magic and tech. This is definitely one of the more original authors on this site, but if you haven't yet read the first two of this series Evolutionary Prisoner, and Evolutionary Convict I highly recommend that you go back and start from there :)
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For the moment gonna leave this as a 4 until theres more, but for now I can safely recommend this. It's a bit too early for a 5 until I see some of the answers behind things like what his system really is and what the other system users are, etc, but im into it so far.
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Read till cp 50,man I can understand you don't want the mc to be op but still you have to give him some abilities. Until now all he have is a chain which he can't use to it's full power, a skill that have a lewd side effect. He have mana but how much idk there no physical stat nor magical stat even though it's a system novle, give him some magic skill or branch skills to his innate skill his not evolving at all nor is his becoming versatile.And give him a specific class or path to walk to become stronger not just finding a ruins in hopes for treasure that he doesn't even know will be useful to him.And mc is a bit coward, he needs to kill strong monstars to become strong but he runs away when encounter a bit strong monstar .All in all it can be fixed inthe future and I hope further chapters are improved
The beginning of the story sounds frighteningly intimidating. Genre - black fantasy ... but see what happens next ...The use of non-typical terms needs to be clarified, I mean, the atrium ... it’s good to have Google and Wikipedia, and if it weren’t? And not all readers will look in Google.Some kind of unbalanced hero ... but easy to read. Words flow like molasses in a confectionery factory. The meaning of what is happening is clear.But the protagonist of some kind is not adequate ... eeee ... he also cannibalized to the same ... yes it is for sure, original, but you forgot to put the genre in tags - horror!The anti-hero turned out to be very disgusting ... the author skillfully managed to reflect this.It would probably be worthwhile to point out in Synopsis that there will be terrible, anti-humanistic values in the novel that contradict common morality.The novella is designed - strongly for an amateur of this genre - black fantasy.I was shocked ... after reading the first chapter ... well, what can I say to the author succeeded in his idea, to create a repulsive hero or anti-hero.Not a typical villain ... some kind of grotesque and Alogism - there are definitions in Google.The author is undoubtedly talented, brilliant, he can easily write an image of otgolkayuzogo antigiroya that the reader is not sophisticated genre - horror, it may even be somewhat shocked, disgusting manner of the protagonist. As I said, my familiar literary critic is simply creating an image of a hero. But to be able to show the image of an anti-hero, this is an extremely difficult task! Only by an experienced writer!Bravo, the author managed only in one chapter, to create such an image.Alas ... as a reader, the first chapter was enough for me, to understand that this is clearly not my genre.The author can only wish ... creative inspiration.
Story had a lot of promise and i enjoyed reading it. Unfortunately it looks like the author has dropped it. There have been no updates here or on his patreon for a while now.
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Nice work author-san. Really appreciate the book.
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