Two chapters out as of this reading.I can tell the author has a good sense of prose and narrative pacing. The technical side of this is good and has few errors. The reading is slightly inhibited by symbol use, but that is more an aspect of WN not providing basic tools like italics and bolding to new writers. That can be corrected in time.Overall, a decent start.
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I think the writing improved as the chapters progressed, but I think the author could benefit from reading other books and becoming more familiar with the craft of writing. To really draw readers into the story, the author should focus on developing clear and detailed descriptions of characters, settings, and events. You have picked a strong storyline (murder & revenge) and if it's done well, it can be really interesting. I wish you the best of luck in polishing and shaping your story.
Really enjoying this book and the story is different. I just wish that the story gets updated regularly and I don’t have to keep waiting. Please update!!!
Love this book it is super interesting pulls you in with the every day life aspect and the spill in of the Rich and powerfuls issues. Looking forward to how this book progresses he only really has till he is 30 to figure everything out ;)
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It's been days since I started reading this novel, I still have a few more chapters to go. It was a fun read.Writing quality: There's a few grammatical errors, some lacks punctuations and capitalizations. I was confused on who was saying some lines in the dialogues. After the author fixed these, it will be a smooth read for the readers. Need some editing for the scenes to flow naturally.Character design: It's difficult for me to remember all the characters. But, I like their strengths. Marceus' power is cool! World background: I want more background of their world, for me to fully connect to the novel.Story development: A bit fast for me, eh? Need some breather scenes. Lol.Stability of updating: You have wrote a lot of chapters, great job!Best of luck, author!
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This novel is good ...Some cons:1.arrogant character2.no love but MC is playboy but no harem3. MC is too overpowered and arrogant5. Some cliche stuffsPros:1. I like it2. I like it3. I like it
..Shitty of the ****tiest mc, a million year old demon lord reincarnates and all of a sudden becomes retarded, can barely cultivate, can’t fight for ****, can’t use his experience from past life in anything useful and most of all he panics everytime somebody attacks him instead of being the million year old demon lord...If it wasn’t cause of having nothing else to read I wouldn’t bother forcing myseöf to sit through this shitty cringefest which makes me literally scream out loud and smash something cause of how retarded mc isOver and out, don’t read unless you got a spare phone cause you might smash yours
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