Overall, I love the premise and dark story. The first few chapters could use a little work with Grammarly but I love how the story is goingKeep up the good work.
Good job.....buh pls keep it up with the update ❤️❤️❤️??? I'm a fan and a huge supporter?
note- I am a big amateur when it comes to writing reviews.
but I will still give it a try.
1. My Favorite part of this novel was the writing quality. I think that the author put a fair amount of work pleasing the readers with his writing capabilities which he absolutely did.
2. As you all may know, the story revolves around a protagonist who got transmigrated into a game that he used to play. and the bad news is that he got put into the body of a person who got NTRed which explains the title. The story revolves a lot about fighting and a lot of cuckolding (not the mc whos doing the cuckolding because he is actually the one getting cucked but ofc its part of the development of the story).
one of the key factors on why the novel got such a bad rating is because of how inconsistent the updates and development were. I can clearly understand that some people are just getting mad because of how slow the story is, and that is where the inconsistency comes into role.
imo, if you are going to try writing a slow-paced story, I would recommend uploading more chapters per week. 1 chapter per week is not really ideal if you want your story to be highly rated and so on. It may be because the author has some work to do irl and because it is only a hobby but it may have been a bit better to upload a bit more than once per week. (for example villain cultivator, endless path infinite cosmos etc)
I actually got a bit confused about the choices of the protagonist considering that he has played the game before and why he did not make use of his knowledge. I mean, if he did not even have knowledge about the game why would we readers even need the 'useless' information? I mean should he not have a bit of an advantage so that he does not start from "scratch"?
I wont really pick on the protagonists development because I actually considered the amount of chapters it has unlike those people complaining about why the protagonist is such a wuss and so on.
overall it is decent and it couldve had a better, overall "look" to it if it was less slow paced but thumbsup for the author.
Please Stop Staring.
It’s weird and kinda annoying.
Though I really can’t blame you,
After all, I’m too handsome.
Why’s it so hard to be ordinary?
Why’s it so hard to be low-key?
I swear by my life,
I really didn’t want to be this good-looking.
*siiigh~*
would be a pretty ok novel if they weren't holding the last 25 chapters hostage behind a paywall, forcing you to become privileged to complete months and months of time invested in reading. i'll consider changing this when they consider being reasonable.
Dont even bother reading this its so boring it would be a smarter decision to just watch 5minutecrafts in youtube its not as braindead as this novel ...AND WHY WOULD SOMEONE NAME IT THE DEMON KING SYSTEM like it gives me braindamage the more i read this
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Writing quality is horrible so is the update stability but be it the story development , Character design , World background they are all pretty cool and story plot is pretty good and one of a kind . I really love the work hopefully it will get better soon ❤️