So far it is a very good read. I must say the 5 ch/wk is a bit meh but I also am greedy. The story itself seems well written so far and the writer seems to have a real sense of proportion and weight which is quite unique. I am very interested so far.
This is one of my Favorite Cultivation Book with Dual Cultivation theme. Story was a bit generic, getting Heaven Defying Treasure, Ancient Inheritance and so on and so forth. But regarding Story development it's one of my Favorite, his Treasure was not that kind of Treasure that automatically makes him Super OP. He needs effort and years of training for it, while his Progress was Certainly out of the World this novel potray that even he needs Hundred of years to raised his Cultivation in later stage. Not like other Novel where the MC Literally still a Teenager but his Cultivation was surpass those Genius that cultivate for hundred of years. Now the hateful part...... Yep this novel originally was from Liberspark translation. Last Translated was in 31 of August, I was wondering why they didn't update after almost two weeks? Now the Answer is here...... Again Qidian Stole popular novel from Another site...... I mean I know even those site didn't have legal right to Translated the novel. But rather than Killing other people's Business, why don't you just repaired your own Business Huh? Qidian? How many Novel in My Library have been Dropped by you? F*cking bullsh*t. This bullsh*ttery started when they changed Spirit Stone to Coins.... Doesn't you know that Snatching other people's way of Living was the same as killing their parents? I hope Karma bite hard on you Qidian B*tch.
Translation: Either the author sure loves to repeat himself or it’s the by product of what’s obviously barely edited MTL. I feel the truth is somewhere in the middle. Characters: At this stage feel pretty one-dimensional, but interactions so far have been pretty light — who knows, they may gain some depth in the future (if this is picked). Word Building: Is as can be expected of novels of these kind, but again that could very well change in the future as this is only the beginning of the story. Overall: It’s okay — not great, but not terrible either. And it’s only 20 chapters, so why not give it a shot?
now im writing this review because the other people i have seen reviewing this are either butt hurt people cause their novel didn't get chosen or people who gives 5 star for some small reason i read most of the reviews but i haven't seen one that actually analyses the novel so ill do that.So first offTranslation quality is 4,7 stars out of 5This is mainly because of the fact that there are practically no grammar mistakes and the transitions are smooth enough said.Stability of updates 4,5 out of 5since this hasn't come to web novel yet i cant expect much from it will probably upload a massive amount of chapter at first then slow down to 1 chapter a day or so and i cant really judge it so it will get a 4.5 from my expectations.Story development 2.8 out of 5While it is an interesting story it has the feeling of many other novels that i have read that are interesting in the beginning and repetitive in the end not to mention there are a lot of cliches in this novel like a system, being a nice guy and unnaturally becoming loyal when they previously wanted to kill that guy.And to tell the truth it feels like hes bound to the world by the things the previous owner did i dont see a reason for him to rescue his disciple that betrayed him and i dont understand how that could offend the main character so the reasons are vague for what he does or why he does things these ways. Character design 3 out of 5 starsThey are average but as i stated before they have unnaturally changed their personality from deadly psychos to loyal somewhat good dogs in around 1 or 2 months considering they have lived for at least a 100 years im surprised they could change that much by some major benefitThe only other reason that can explain their personality changing that much is that they are acting cause they think their master can see everything but from their thought process that we are shown that is not very likely.World background 3.2 out of 5It hasn't been developed much they practically put out some sect names witch the only ones of importance are nether sect heavenly something and clarity sect, after that they put out some cultivating rank thingy yet the only thing i remember are divine court something and eight Brahma something they haven't explained **** and i cant understand why they have done so.My personal opinion of this novel is that it is quite good but its not 5 star nor is it one star if this is you first read it i suggest you try it but if you are tired from cliches such as system Mc walking into traps that he could avoid if he was a bit more cold then dont do this novel the only good point is that i haven't seen a young master but considering his position i dont think a young master would dare trouble him.oh one more thing i dont think there will be romance so if you dont like that you should also try this novel for the people i talked about in the beginning im not trying to offend you by saying that you are butt hurt but im trying to say that its very childish to leave a review yet not having read the book same goes for keep up the good work 5 stars review im starting to have serious trust issues because of you reviews witch are made after reading some pages and being like wow i like this novel lets put some 5 star reviews i dont know what happens later in the story but i like this novel and i dont know how to judge a book so ill just say some word to fill in the word count.so ill end with this dont review a book without judging the book from all the point you've seen like translation character story dont just go for your personal opinion judge it from an objective position and see the logical false things and point that out since that will help a story much more than some 5 star or 1 star reviews.
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How in the literal heck did this not get pick and trash old ancestor one did?The ancestor was full on face slapping one shots.What is web novel doingggggg
i love it
WARNING: if you read this, your brain will turn into vegetables. This novel will make you puke and have diarrhea because it is just that bad.
as at chapter 65 I'm really struggling here I can see great potential in this novel but this isn't making any sense. The mc is a coward like severe coward and everyone his age is basically a drama queen everyone throwing temper tantrums out of the blue for little to ko reason. the people that bully him he doesn't even take revenge despite now having power. this novel just feels like I'm walking in a quagmire question after question and nothing ever gets explained literally nothing
So many petty comments.. The novel of Pierce the heavens synopsis was misleading, I did read it afterwards & it was a really cool novel and I admit voting without reading is very irrational but at least we had a synopsis to base from. But here so many people being petty and personal over a misunderstanding, the bad comments of that novel were all deleted. And it's not like you bunch didn't judge this novel by it's cover, and not all of us will like the same thing whether a novel leaning towards Feminity or masculinity. Apparently Qidian has this much toxic people, grow up. If I encounter this toxicity this much, I will just leave QIDIAN, at that point screw novels.
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