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This book reminds me of a show on tv from its title alone
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
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just how many clones are there of 179 or Ned and when will there real use of magic start?. He has pure magic then anyone in the world but can't use it. that kinda suck.
Really funny. I enjoy the comedy and dark aspects, and I was shocked at the blend. Looking forward to more chaotic character actions and world development.
Let me start by saying I love the writing and aspects of the plot. However, the whole plot feels like the a strange mix-mash of two different stories. Im not sure who the MC is on one hand there is li xiang the chaos butterfly with a tragic past and a charcter i’m really intrested about. She looks like she has a layered backround and a cool set powers. On the otherhand there is her brother? I think. Who is just bland and arrogant and just kind of annoying. It feels like you as an author are trying to link these to stories together but its not working please focus on one charcted it would be best if that character was the chaos butterfly in your title. Apart from that I really hope you expand on her past and I loved the whole cultivation system much more original than other webnovels. Keep it up the story has lots of potential. For best results maybe rewrite aspects if the story focusing on li xiang starting with her intial rebirth? In the immortal world and slow down the pacing of her getting that power. ?
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Oh wow AMAZINGLY TERRIBLE!!!What the heck is this!? You need to write something different or else you will never get what you want......................
In like your writing here. Although I have to note that there are some typos, I think you should check again before uploading the next one. I really like Maggie as the filler! Can we meet more of him in the future?? Peace out.
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So far for being a new novel it's cleanly written and rather refreshing! I like it, it is tagged as BL and GL so maybe we'll get a diversity in characters?! I'm kinda excited! Can't wait...tho it seems BL will play a big part in this! Ahhh! T_T I want to read more!Author says they'll publish every Monday! Hope that is true!
