Amazing plot so far. Hope it gets picked ...................................................................................................................
We are at just the begining, but I love it! I dont usually write reviews, but this novel deserves it. It has good quality, no grammar problems, interesting charachters and development and most importantly it isnt boring!I have just one negativum, the Author has not enough self- confidence, even the parts that he deems as boring are fantastic, so keep up the good work and thank you for the experience!!!
at chapter 18 interesting so far.but one big question isnt the main character in the summary a girl?? like Raven hasnt even appeared? or is it about Draven who is a boy?
Mind-blowing experience so far, the story interagration of action, comedy and drama is fantastic, not to mention it has awesome world building, and very intriguing plot. The pacing is ok, nothing too wild, and writing quality is top notch, literal perfection. I see nothing wrong with this novel, and so should you. and to the author, GREAT WORK MAN, WHATEVER YOURE DOING, KEEP DOING IT CAUSE ITS GOOD. Wish you best of luck mate?
This is the novel for the manga All Hail The Sect Leader, and I believe it deserves 5 stars.The manga is a great read: It’s artwork is excellent, and it takes a different approach to what is commonly seen in the cultivation genre. Sadly, there is a disparity between the novel and the manga.
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Let's make the first actual review. The story is extremely repetitive and cliche. It's almost identical to countless others cultivation stories. You have the ex-girlfriend betraying him with an arrogant young master, he's treated like trash by everyone, well, you get where this is going... It's not entirely bad, though. Author seems not to be an *******, he might develop this novel in a better way in the upcoming chapters.
Seriously need a direction for the story. It’s just unecessary upgrades, that are frankly hard to keep track of if your not bothered to go the all the system stuff.Some character and world development please... and I’ll check back on you after a while
well gonna give this 5 star and hope u not gonna drop this story ....................................... ............ ......................
So this would be a littbe bit spoiler for those who haven't read it,The concept of the story is quite interesting, instead overpowered or average mc, this mc however, lower than average... his suffering like without end just because being weak even weaker than a person without Qi. I think his honor and lust for revenge that would likely become the core of plot pushing-wheelThe story in my opinion is a bit rushing, especially first two chapters. I think in the beginning the readers should be given how the mc's life in the family that despise him like show them the kind side of the mc and how he sacrificed and protected the weak, in order to create a strong bond with the mc, so that when he eventually get banished, the readers would get the feeling of sorrow and empathy.Then the writting, I think it's the punctuation, especially lack of coma and then the "tone color" of the dialogues to give the characters, charachters.Overall the story is unique even tho this is the first martial art-based novel I read. With the time, you'll eventually become a great writer!.....Sincerely,~ Houraji Ballare
The novel is very good..... It has more than 1000 chapters already.... I don't know how these guys are doing the voting stuff and ignoring an exceptional piece of work like this...