Plot is interesting... characters are well developed except the MC..he is the dumbest or most idiot guy I've ever seen..i mean he is going into a new world, he could have read something about it either online or from his friends but he did not..even he want to go blind in the game he could have used the library or ask information from other NPCs...his priority are not same.. I've read about 150 chapters but all I've seen MC in 2 sects and forest, that's it...he don't bothered to know about the city he is living in, it's history or geography or political situation...it's one thing to make MC a naive one but to make him retard or a sheep.
While it isn't perfect, this is a better example of the trope of using future knowledge to your benefit. What really makes it stand out is the protagonist doesn't care if his actions change outcomes and in facts welcomes changes as opportunities to be exploited. It sometimes suffers from a little deus ex machina where he conveniently finds the design he needs or stumbles upon a treasure that helps him in his next encounter. The solutions he comes up with and his unorthodox methodology are enjoyable though. It also doesn't appear to be written off the cuff as there is evidence of foreshadowing and links back to earlier characters and story that show there is at least some planning behind it. Author doesn't conveniently forget about things just because it happened 40 chapters ago.
As expected of Hide! His books are always interesting to read. And this one was no different. I had a lot of fun reading it though it took me a while understand Dilan. I can not spoil anything more here.
As of chapter 5, it's a nice book
I kiss a CEO he like it why i cant open it yhis story in first chapter i lije to start reading...
please update
The book is brilliant. But starting to lose interest in it as every story and book should have an end, however this book seem to be unfinished and chapters are added daily. It is getting too costly...
Much better story line nice to see the heroine taking care of herself and honest!!!!
excellent app my best app so far
Don't drag the story line on with this amnesia get rid of Whitney she just like Jenna and get rid of Cade his so annoying like the rest of them
Why is the author going round in circles repeating the same things? I thought this was a good book but now I don't think so. Are we going to see O'Dell and Tara getting back together for the umpteenth time? ...
also can't wait for Kai to explain to her how he really feels xx