Firstly, you have a great mind!!Excellent world description, imagination and character thoughts. The plot is quite interesting and goes much more interesting from chapter to chapter.Keep Going!!!
The author trying hard to make it funny but fail miserably. The mc is just... what can i say ? Dumb.Oh im dead. Looks like ive been transmigrated.There is no emotion you can feel there. And that apps that can sense users emotion change ? This author dont know **** about programming.
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Man my favourite novel Fan-fic so 5 starts. I still hasn't start reading it. It was just found this In new release ranking.......................................................
The story itself is very cliché, but I still found it enjoyable and interesting. I was so into it that I lost track of time, and I even felt a little frustrated because I'm already at the latest chapter. I want mooooore
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5 STAR to this Novel. This is mix with different novel on it. OP - Nation Building - Level Up - System - Apocalypse - I highly recommend it to those enjoy this kinda of Genre. Consider putting storage devices, special space, mecha. Thank you very much for giving us this original novel for leeches like me. :0
Super slow pacing that is actually a little annoying, when she gets to the shadow realm she basically stay in a cave cooking for 5 chapters.. MC seems to lack character development and the story barely moved on, I dont see any development in 50 chapter, seems like you are trying to drag things out because those 50 chapters could easily have been 20 since there is basically nothing in it, neither introduction, plot development, or character development.. Well I guess there is barely a little of friendship and such..
Mr. Editor please choose this book!Mr. Editor please choose this book!Mr. Editor please choose this book!Mr. Editor please choose this book!Mr. Editor please choose this book!
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Honestly has been better than I expected this to be and look forward to more of the story once I can unlock it xD. Not super op at first so character growth is a thing and doesn't (at least for the moment) seem forced. Is definitely dark and I haven't even finished with whats out currently.
Never thought I would read a story that uses lewdness to get stronger but it was still a good read nonetheless, would definitely recommend to read it, as its worth your time.