Ive spent 5 minutes thinking of a review with no luck. Its good.goddαmn webnovel makes you have a longer review. Stupid αss app
though I don't know how to feel about our dear author wanting to be spit on, I do really like this story and hope more people can come and read it to, it's been an amazing read and forms an addictive craving for more
this is a fun story. I like the character and the action so far. ???????????????☺????☺?????????☺?????????????????????????????????
Love the whole idea of this book well written with interesting and likeable characters that have you rooting for them and hating the bad guy!!!Tame more interesting demons i cant wait!!
The first problem is the name of the MC, a western name among asiatic names is just a big NO…The second problem is the Copy Paste of the novel of Martial World.Third if any of u read the Novel of Nano Machine the system is just a copy of that one with diferent name and a twist but the same…Fourth and main problem the autor is selling us a chinese name in the Sinopsis just to find out that his name is Victor like really man.This is getting one star for the reason i cant give a 0.
translation isn't smooth. then again this is not the orignal copy. i'm happy i can find it for free elsewhere. shouldn't steal peoples work.
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hi man i really loved how the story was going at first but i really can t get past the 1st chapter the grammar and conjugation is really hard to read/understand and i waste a lot of time correcting it in my mind before passing to the next paragraph. please find an editor(someone who corrects grammar etc) or rewrite them. i guarantee you that a lot of people stopped reading after a few chapters
I like the master and disciple theme, but this novel could ruin it, the MC only accepts female disciples and that's not the problem, but it seems that they have all been brainwashed into wanting to just lick the MC ignoring their personalities and just making the reason for their existence to lick the MC, seriously it seems like it was actually written by a person who has never had a loving relationship in his life.about the world of romance: generic no salt, ridiculous advances, and a lot of slap in the face the secondary characters: I skipped the interactions for my mental healthfinally, read it at your own risk.(my English is my second language, don't notice if it seems a bit "abnormal")
The story is good, however not everything is fleshed out. Also, that are more inconsistencies than the normal Chinese light novel. The translation is obviously Machine and not the best one. But if you are willing to not be too concerned over that then this is a fun read. An editor would make this a 4.5.
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Great story, I was really surprised at how good it is. The description said system and we have a system, it said sport we have the sport. I just would like for it to be updated more as it is very good!