Alibi_Lullaby
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I can tell that you made an effort making an uncommon world background! It was fun and little unique. Hope you continues to produce this with the same quality. Good job!
Shameless author review. The plot is a really planned one. Do note that I’m still 14 years old and therefore busy with school, so I can’t upload consistently. Every chapters is average 1.2k words. My writing quality is the main thing I want to improve for the time being. That’s why I want you all to write a critic about my grammar or choices of words or my descriptive texts and dialogues, I know that there’s at least 20 faults and it would be greatly valued, if you write a critic. Thank you. Enjoy!
When you have finished reading the first chapter (which is where the story begins), you will be left wondering what took place because the story is rather original, the writing is excellent, there are no errors, and the plot is really intriguing.I love how the main character (MC) was designed to have a one-of-a-kind personality with a pinchof craziness.I am excited to readthe rest of this story.
This is a novel to red. It is interesting an can keep you hooked. Bravo!!!!!
Hey there, author here! So, I am going to rate my own story and leave this review for those who might get interested in giving it a try after reding through the synopsis. Also, please, if you are liking this novel leave your review and slowly move your fingers to that little "vote" button (press it!). HUEHUEHUE *evil laugh* - "Thank you! my dear reader!"Writing Quality – First of all, I would like to emphasize that English is not my first language and I have been studying it for five years. So, I might make a few mistakes here and there. However, I am always proofreading and using softwares to improve the writing. Story Development – I don’t think that the story development is going to deviate much from other novels. However, as a reader, I have always been losing myself when an author drifts too apart from a chronological line of events, so I am going to follow as much as possible an established order. I don’t want to write something confusing. Now, talking about the pace of the story, the start is going to be a bit chaotic, due to the situation that the MC finds himself in. However, the future chapters are going to slowly cement a flow. Character Design – I have always loved characters that are rational, self-centered, somewhat arrogant, and confident. Someone who is always planning and thinking how they can get the most of a situation, but still maintains certain values. This is the MC that I am trying to build. As for the other characters, I will be setting them according to the story’s progression. (I don't have but a few important character planned).Updating Stability – Around 2-3 chapters/week. I may exceed that amount if I have enough free time. World Background – It’s a world filled with different species, where all beings can become stronger through Mana. A world that is in the point of “rupture”. I know it’s a common setting, but I will be adding things up as the chapters are updates. However, I plan on doing a good job on that. (I hope)If you have read the synopsis and this review, and liked it, please consider giving this book a try."Also, don't forget to leave your vote and a review if you liked this work" - The author wrote, with hopeful eyes, waiting for your response. - "Thank you!"
Giant walls of text, headache inducing. No editing.
I looked at the title and for some reason, unknown to god! thought Australia.
Then I saw that author was Australian.
Then I laughed for longer than I’m willing to admit.
This has been my ted talk.
Beginning is pretty cliche, but...
This novel is basically A SUPERIOR version of Gamers of the Underworld MIXED WITH amazing plot from The Legendary Mechanic.
Gamers of the Underworld are trash btw. and so is Boss Behind the Game. Even more so compared to I have a bunch of players on Earth.
Overlord Xiye may not be as amazing as Black Star, but the Earth here will probably follow the same plot which is Planet joining galaxy. The game is not much of a game, because players are already starting to believe that this is not a game. Also, Earth in this novel has something similar to coronavirus outbreak haha truly delivered on time. Side characters have personalities and they are honestly better off as MCs than the MC himself there.
Is it yuri or not?
Is it yuri or not?
Is it yuri or not?
Is it yuri or not?
Is it yuri or not?
Is it yuri or not?
Is it yuri or not?
Ill just stuck this story First in my librabry if there is still no romance...
I read this on novelfull and it has yet to update for now it stops at chapter 123 if you continue to update at this speed you'll be caught up soon
