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A good start, with minimal grammar errors and good prose. This'll go far given enough time. Dialogue flows organically, but you might want to flesh it out a bit more. Describe the character's cadence or subtle mannerisms during dialogue to give it more impact and individuality.
Other than that? I'll see what becomes of this after a few more chapters. Keep on writing
Again a good book from the author.
The synopsis got me hooked already and when I started to read I couldn't stop at all before I was on the latest chapter.
So try this romance novel that is quite a realistic and interesting and you might get hooked also and ask from yourself when the next chapter is going to get released.
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Mediocre would be praise for this novel. Just absolute trash perfectly describes this story. I pray that this does not get chosen to get translated.
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Really hope nnone buy privilege. Author is complete liar. All promises are broken the day they are given. Story is almost repeat of the first book which was dropped because author didnt get enough money after all shit he gave his readers. Too much cliche and cliffs.
Very good! Anyone wondering if they should read it, you definitely should! Haven't read all of it yet, but thumbs up for this one. And I have to say beautiful front cover. Great work.
If the idea is to be judged here this piece would get 5* easily. Unfortunately, bad grammar makes the reading experience almost unbearable. Use of personal pronouns is wrong and that is a reason why the story is so so so confusing at times. Tbh it is hard to say something to story and character development and design. Focus while reading is simply somewhere else. If you are able to overlook grammar, spelling and word mistakes and errors (!!) then this one could be a gem for you. If you are annoyed by a shit to of mistakes and errors (again!!!) please do yourself a favor and avoid this piece at any cost.
While this novel is quite good, it has some nationalism content. To be more specific, it's about Li ziqi's video in which she made kimchi, a Korean national dish but claimed it's from China. The relationship between China and other Asian countries has been tense recently because China claim that others culture is theirs. Anyway, the author support the notion that Kimchi is from China so for me even if the novel is entertaining, it's a nope.
You are so poor in story writing.. You keep on repeating one fact over and over again.. In a chapter only 2 - 3 character dialog.. I hate what u are doing to the character plot. Pls be creative.. I score you 1/10