Nice novel.Please update regularly and please add more 18+ scenes,hehe.I will alway full star in review.Thanks
First of all, wait until you read at least five chapters before forming an opinion. The first two chapters are quite small and ordinary, but the story quality gives a super jump (and I mean it) after the third one. The author increased the amount written after the third chapter as well. What really caught my attention is the MC and how the world thinks about the wisp, and I've never seen a wisp MC before. Another excellent point in this story is the MC cheat. This one was very well thought, and really well elaborated.
Pretty generic and cliche novel. The story begin with cripple MC, loving father, decline family with traitorous and ambitious elder, mysterious FL reside in family and bla bla bla... i can even predict the future development look like.
I think this novel very much similar to “Battle Through the Heaven” except for the golden finger of MC.
The grammar is perfect so you don't have to worry about loses brain cells. The world building and characters are also really good; the MC's connection to the world he gets put in and how its handled makes everything more interesting. Not only is the story good but the author pumps out chapters like crazy and that enthusiasm is pretty good for writing a story, as it can be pretty easy to lose motivation if something comes up.
Did the author drop the book?...............................................................................................................
I love this novel it is very detailed, the author channels aspects of the real world in his story and it's nice how the characters feel and react.
It starts like your typical harem novel, and all of a sudden there is a twist, where is the knocking coming from? A horror, comedy, romance give it a try to chapter 10.
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Your writing can improve. But The writing flow made me easy to read and understand about the characters and everything. I can imagine them as I read it. Your writing is neat and clear.Keep it up!
The synopsis attracted me and the story itself made me stay. I really love this novel and the chapter release rate of the author is also so fast. Please don't exhaust yourself Mr. author and I really hope the novel keeps going. I will not talk about the story as its just better to go and read it instead. I'll be just spoiling the good fun.Keep up the good work!
The writing quality is pretty amazing compared to the other novels. The update stability has so far been stable at 7 per week and ik its quite a lot but i like the novel so much that i would like even more. The story development is perfect, neither too slow to get boring nor too fast to skip details. The character developmeny is admirable as it provides a lot of story to most of the side characters, they would also have emotion so they arent just NPC-like. The world background is pretty good at it involves the Mc’s neighborhood as so far, leading to the entire world and also hints on the entire universe being involved. Overall i recommend this novel greatly to anyone who likes action, a smart mc, an mc with good power but also has lots of room for development, a cold blooded mc and Etc. Anyways thanks for reading this review and I hope the author never drops this!
Really addictive reading. It pisses me off to see a work of such high quality not get many views, while complete crap novels get so many just for including a system. This is a great read, and more people should check this out. Really have to feel for the young protagonist. He is a magnet for suffering. Great lively opening too, with the kid's village getting decimated. Well written, perfect pacing and fantastic world building. A top tier web fiction for sure.