Well, first off I wanted to elaborate It's pretty fine read, that feels like a proper light novel with just some minor problems. Like logic behind characters actions really screwed, and because of this author have some need to explain how they come to this. A lot of lucky moments, that you could see from just a glance that it's forced. Now more of personal preference.I don't understand how you created it. It's basically shounen cliches stories with sprinkle of smut and a lot of cringe. Mc? Beta guy with wild demon inside of him. How wild demon in him? As far as Japanese cliche allowed him. Just a guy that doesn't afraid of fighting and peaking out girls. With morales and need of showing off and being a hero? Oooph...How good characters? They do dumb stuff regularly, for the sake of a story. I don't know, not sure. How good lewds? Well, if you close you eyes on a lot of cringe lines of mc, and skip his thoughts. It's very mild, I never understood why Damien wild, when he is quite prude and gentlemanly.In the end, it's a huge disappointment in smut area, and as a proper story. If you read some harem light novels, you already see those characters, situations, and already could predict where and how, main character get his mental growth. The worst problem, you still need to read about mc, when there is better character which is Damien.P. S. Did we return in 2013? Where those things where popular, it's even called new and fresh... Bruh.
The story has a lot of grammatical issues. There was some sentences that could have been worded differently for a better story flow. A few words were misspelled, and transitioning to the next scene is kind of hard to followed. But, every authors is bound to have a lot to a few writing issues. No one is spare! I have never seen an author with a grammar-free story before. With that said, my honest thought is....I'm a big mythology lover! love, love, love it! This story is right up my ally! I like how the author indicated which gods or goddesses is which, and power. But in the long-run it might be harder to remember which god and power they are.The author could make a page, listing them all or remind the reader at the end of each chapters ( this might be a bit much). Another thing is the characters. They were appearing one by one, but for those that were introduce at the beginning beside the gods, it was a bit hard to follow. I would think, for me, is that the pacing was a bit too fast. Especially, the emotional distress that Sol had when he was desperately searching for Anya. A short description about their relationship would be great in supporting his action. I feel like there's more it than just a simple teacher and student relationship. There were a few plot hole that I found to be inconsistent, but the story is still in development , so scratch that. Maybe, there's a plot twist that the author is planning on later. In overall, even thought there are grammatical issues. That could be fix, so there's no need to worry. Beside that the author is doing great! Keep up the good work!
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