Something to keep yourself busy with, pretty interesting novel. not super good but still better than most nonsense on this app. mc isn't brain dead so I guess that's another plus.
Great story build up.Please don't stop writing this book and make sure to complete it. Even though English isn't the author's native language, he's trying his best. This is one of the best story here.
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The name is quite catchy and you get the main concept of the story from the synopsis as well. So far I read, the story has potential and if you keep working on it, I think it will be an amazing piece of work!
face slappingfast paced businessgenericonly found 50 raw chapters in googleso I think the updates will slow down after 10 more chapters if it gets picked
Why did this novel stop getting updated?
So excited to read the sequel to strongest guild master. Currently at about ch21 so far so good great beginning to set you the story can wait to see how far max goes.
an interesting concept for the story..love the way it builds up anticipation.. looking forward to the next update down side is the long waiting period for the next chapters.. this novel will be ranked among the top if it has many chapters
nice work author..... l really like ur writting skill as well.. and the story is very interesting... plzzz keep uploading more so that l can read more....all the very best and do upload more... l can't wait to read what the story....
It is unfortunatly very bland. after mc initially fights back against bullies after getting stronger he just doesn't do anything... based on his background he should be filled with anger and thoughts of revenge.. but nope. nothing. everyone who bullied him, teachers who ignored it, parents who underfed and completely ignored him, brother who despised him. nothing. no mention of his emotions/plans. Additionally, there is no drive to grow stronger quicker by seeking out opportunities to absorb mana from people (bullies would be the prime targets, and he could do it outside of school avoiding the excuse of a teacher detecting it) or by getting his hands on beast cores. mc is content with living a normal school life and working a normal part time job to pay the rent. thus we just get normal school arc, taking classes, small duels and stuff. all this while an actual tournament arc is looming in the distance, which I cant imagine will be any better.Bland is the best word I can think of to describe it. With that said, the premise and writing quality is good and the story is by no means irredeemable if author better explores the emotional side of the mc. Either by having him use his newfound powers to get revenge (I feel like it would be reasonable for a kid in his situation to let the power get a little bit to his head and walk down a darker path) or by clearly motivating to the reader why this isn't happening, maybe he is struggling with such feelings but is able to hold the back.
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Among the best realistic scifi ive ever read, how the story moves, the filler (fluff-potential) chapters with the female lead, the scientific and technological details, the world itself, wow just amazing...really recommended thank you author for bringing this piece of literature to life.