well I read 10 chapter's and it's a good start for the story well a level 5 defeat the level 1000 weird but funny at the same time let see how the story progresses
good luck
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Everything is good so far, I say so far since there wasn’t enough chaps to actually judge it good. I just wanna give ideas, don’t make the mother be a very easy capture, he is still her son, she took care of him since he was a child so there is bound to be complications when he abruptly changes his view on her, just take it slow. The big sister, perfect, couldn’t have done that better, lil sis, perfect, reminds me of ‘Little rascal doesn’t want to meet a bad end’.
Make him do exercise early on, but not to the level where after a year timeskip, he can destroy mountains, that’s stupid, just enough to get him going.
Don’t make this guy rely on his system all the time, since you wrote that he is a straight A student then he should be pretty smart, and people who are good at chess are very good at tactics and split second decision making so you can make use of that.
When he starts his first se.x scene, take advantage of the fact that he has watch a lot of **** and hentai that he knows how to pleasure women even though he is a virgin, I already tried that, and I was glad I spent a couple of hours watching po.rn and hen.tai.
Don’t let him be a pushover, It’s kinda weird being a harem protagonist while you’re being dominated in bed.
100 chaps is too long for a se.x scene, just do timeskip dude.
its rare to find good taming novels, give this one a go and you'll be suprised??..........................................................
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It starts pretty well with the mc trying to understand his new powers ,hunting ,finding a goal ecc, but after the first volume the ghost theme is almost completely abandoned and he becomes a normal human with some special abilities
An interesting world where people have inborn traits that open up durning puberty rather x menish as the abilitys are limited in Scope but can grow.
It's a beautiful story and one of the best original fanfiction I've had in years. the only thing to say will be to have put the images of each girl, woman or character added because there are many characters from other manga or anime and for a person who has not seen or read all it is different manga that poses a problem of imagining what certain characters look like. Really hats off, it's a very good plot, I'm impatiently awaiting the continuation
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not a bad read...
Concept is great, but hate characters. MC is "smart" but almost every action he takes is stupid. "Sigma mentality i dont need women and i focus on work " quickly turn to" i drink only bear, i dont get enough sleep and i f every chapter while having loli as his future wife". Things are also done impossibly quickly.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?