two words : Awesome Underrated. This is such a nice fanfic.
If you can compare it to other novels, it is like the korean novel Running away from the hero that combines with a system.. It has a bit of a different feel, but has the same plot of a funny instructor villain.. You are an instructor who trains villains and some disciple become a villain or a hero who loves you or wants to take your life like a tsundere or yandere... hahaha.. give it a try..
Bro let me tell you this, this novel is dank. love it man. the MC is smart and logical all of his actions are somthing that is considered normal but hes not overly OP but just enough. Plus no cliche man, even doe he has a step sister theres no sweat home alabama over here nor annoying talented sister that pisses you of.
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The story plot so far is actually quite interesting but the gammar and the writing skills of the author is not very good as most of the sentences are run off lines and do not match with the next making it quite hard to read if the author improves on his writing the novel will be way better.
I enjoyed reading what little is written of Re:Aquatic Life - The Blue Serpentine. Unfortunately, it seems like the novel has been dropped. I wish the author would continue it.
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An excellent addition in the sci-fi genre. All those who has taste for sci-fi reading, come grab the book. As for me I am going to keep it my library for sure.
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No offence to u author but read this and waited till i read all chapters b4 i came to any opinion and this is that ur story is crap the system was a waste the point behind a system even it isn't like the normal op system is to offer asistance all it did was talk do some increased healing and pump adrenaline then u tortured and killed a 2 yrs old off for some character development that didnt pull through and ur mc behave like a pussy in the face of death after dying 3 times whats the point of all that training if he aint gonna use it cause it clearly states he was strong enough to beat his father when he was goin all out and then there was making it seem like there person that could fight his father that was attacking them yep so in all crap.