prashant_dasari
i like OP MC. its the best MC ever. keep up the good work . hehehe. release more chapters bro. im hungry. noo WE are hungry . like wolves ready to pounce at you .
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I wanted to give a review, even though its really new! I liked it alot and want the Author to write more! I like the MC he is so...cool. I mean, he seems like he was actually pretty low key in his past life or something, so the way he is getting portrayed is pretty nicely done. He's not instantly going to his family, and instead he's planning on trying to save others, maybe even get revenge? I do give the MC props for actually telling his family where to go. No beating around the bush there. I do hope this one will update and not simply get dropped.
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I think you should take time writing chapters
It's an interesting story, world, and magic. It's just the absolute lack of grammar, and many sentences make no sense. Also, the pay wall is way too early, especially for the quality and length of the chapters. The characters are decent, but half the time, you can't understand their intentions or emotions because of the poor writing.
its one of my favorite novels!!!!!!!!!!!
author.... the chapter is taking a long time, please don't make me worry.............................................................................
Third book in the series, despite it’s brevity I liked it quite a bit.Jake is the “edgiest” of the three heroes but somehow as the edgiest he’s better at friends then Leon and Ryan. I thought that was amusing.I’m sad it’s over already but I’m hoping we get to see a book 4 sometime. As a note for the author, working on reducing some your crutch phrases like “in the end” might be a good idea.Also a one chapter epilogue is kind of a bummer.
The idea seems unique, but the character just seems dense and the overwhelming amount of self praise the mc gives himself, "the MC is suave" "the MC is highly emotionally intelligent
I want to give a 5-star review but I decided not to. I'm afraid the author would be distracted causing delayed chapters.
