A great storyline with a strong background. The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable. Which makes the whole read enjoyable.
I've read it until chapter five. I will read more when available.The premise is ordinary—an average guy who found a system. Though I am very much intrigued by the system, will there be some sort of secret store? Any special missions? I hope it's a non-sentient system. The writing is excellent, and if you have read the author's fanfic, then you'd understand and feel confident about the story. I'm curious about where the MC goes and when he will enter the movies. Maybe he can enter the anime and Manga industry too? Possibilities are endless with such kinds of novels. One thing is for sure. I'll be following this story.
A well written, well paced, very interesting story. With the lead’s background, the readers automatically have to root for him and follow him progress. There’s so much to keep the readers wanting more. A very fun read. Ps…It’ll be so crazy if it turns out his “girl” did all that to him and not her dad. ?
There were numerous punctuation mistakes which made it hard to understand and decreased the speed of reading the text. But, the concept was quite interesting. I also like the cover.
Couldn't get past the first 30 chapters because of how cringey it is and how uncomfortable it makes me.
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A very interesting story. The beginning and the end are unpredictable. The story is dynamic, the text block has some rough edges. But these are trifles compared to the magnificent content of the story.
This is a very intriguing novel!
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The author is obsessed with *** with older women and while the novel was hard to read I wanted to give it a chance because a lot of novels improve after the initial chapters. However this one does not it doubles down on *** as its theme. Any potential the novel had suffers because of the authors obsession with ***. To make matters worse the author removes reviews trying to hide the novels real rating.