The overall idea of the novel is good, it's the reason I gave this a novel a try but 2 major things have made it so I'm hesitant to continue...
1 - although not bad so far, the mc has shown foreshadowing of becoming another happy go lucky, plot armour, arrogant mc that this site is famous for, he hasn't done anything to fall into that category yet but the way it has been written and the way the mc thinks and reacts to the things happening to him are way to similar to those sort of novels this site is famous for (perhaps I'm being paranoid to be fair).
2 - (and honestly this is the main reason) the fact that it has become locked at chapter 5 is mindboggling, It is way to early to tell if this is a novel I want to commit and pay for. I'm already somewhat skeptical about how it will be progress for the reasons stated above, so with that kind of mindset how am I going to pay and continue such a novel.
If there is anybody who has gone on ahead and read the chapters 5+ please tell me if it is worth paying for to read, the premise of the novel is really interesting to me and I'm just hoping it doesn't digress into those brain dead plot armour story's. But until I know I'm not willing to pay, I've been burned to much on this site
This novel is amazing I love it. The story line is fun the orc pov is really done well.
Plus the plot isn't just forced or just has plot armor! it works the way it's meant to and makes sense, and to be honest that's all you need to get 5 stars from me.
Though sometimes the writing quality dips a bit, ik you've said before you plan to do a mass correction thing and tbh they are just a few spelling mistakes here and there so here is the 5 star for writing quality ahead of time!
But make sure to correct them all!
dont let me down!!!!!!
and keep being awesome
(also I don't mind the other pov thing but so others don't complain keep it to 2 POVs and clearly write
Alex's POV or POV ??? / unknown
or something like that, so they don't get confused )
thank for reading
here's one year's worth of luck you'll need it for 2021
the synopsis of this reminds me of sss class suicide hunter anyway this seems cool and now a song by the mad king
Gunter, why did you gunt my fries?
I gunted them, and they were mine.What kind of gunt gunts his Gunter's fries,
And doesn't even gunt him in the eyes?
Gunter, there were tears there.
If you gunted them, would you even care?Gunter, do you even love me?
I read the title and I triple checked whether I was browsing Male lead section or Female Lead section. then started reading just to see how it got till here and all I can say is 'A bad novels a bad novel. End of story.'
This novel is worth to read.. You're such a good writer
Okay it seems I will be the author's first.
Let's see. The story goes off interestingly, maybe the author could make the flow go smoother int he beginning of the first chap, but out of that I didn't see any mistake.
Grammar great, plot amazing, world build is still waited. Now we only need to wait what will happen.
Good job dear... Author!:)
To be honest when I first started the book I wasn’t expecting much, but when you read deeper into the novel it becomes so much more interesting...
Self review and some important info. This is my first book so please tell me if there are any mistakes, and I am still in school so I might not update stably. Also even though the book is lighthearted right now, there will be some pretty messed up stuff later on, so if you are uncomfortable with that then you should stop reading. if you have any questions, just comment and I will read it.
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This novel finally being pick... Mtl quality for this one is killing me, so really appreciate it for being picked.Anyway, I actually not recommending this. Mc is a coward that wouldn't go out adventuring except when people thrash the sect itself... So if you want to read adventure kind, this is not for you..
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