This one is kinda similar to other "Reincarnated as NPC in game" types of novels. It is much more fleshed out compared to other trial read novels. The 1st 3 chp are kind off a prologue and so it might be confusing. If you read ahead, you will see that the plot moves ahead pretty well. The translation sucks though as words are constantly omitted among sentences.
The writing quality of this book frightens me. I know English isn't the author's first language, but it's as bad as google translate for the 33 chapters that I've read. This book seriously needs an editor. Any editor that's well-versed in English and above the mental age of 14 will change this book for the better... or at least make it less excruciating to read.
The story is quite a cliche, but I like the genre. I've only read a bit, so I can't say much, but it's pretty generic and monotone for a start.
I can't see much character design. MC's backstory is very overused, and side characters only stay to the side.
World background is at least interesting. It's always the world background bringing up the entire genre. Likewise, I only read this novel to immerse myself in the genre.
And I only write reviews when novels are either extremely good or downright bad. I hope the author makes the plot exciting and hires an editor so I can continue to read and give it a chance once more. I'm forced to stop reading at 33 chapters in.
Writing Quality: Worst than MTL. But Ill give two stars for the sake of having an auto correct and auto paraphrase in my brain.
Story Development: What is that? This fanfic doesnt have that. It just follows the plot with slight changes.
Character Design: Imagine Saitama as MC but a simp. Fubuki is also what you didnt expect. she's a reincarnator so the author just wanted Fubuki for her body. Totally wasted my time reading this because of that.
Updating Stability: Might as well the author drop this and start a new one. Since he barely updates this fanfic.
World Background: Author expects us to have read the manga or anime so he didn't tell us about the time, place, etc.
Overall: Would not suggest for you readers to read this if you expect a nice Fubuki X Saitama fluff. This is just disappointment. This is a low tier fanfic. Even worst than those harem gotta catch them all like pokemon fanfic. I tried my best persevering through reading it but I could only reach 40 chapters.
The story and world seem well thought out and interesting. The characters are a struggle to read. I keep stopping and doing something else for a while before coming back to this. I want to like it. I want to enjoy it because the premise is one I like and the world seems interesting. But I keep losing interest whenever I read character interactions.
The language thing at the start is really cool. The wall/gate is interesting. I really like the fire dog fight. The premise of a mage in a cultivation world is a great one. I have read maybe three or four books that try to cover it and all were either cut short (Essence of Cultivation) or fell off (Dao of Magic).
The MC and a potential FL are really our only two main characters in the first twenty chapters. The MC just feels off somehow. Disjointed. He has a lot going on and much of it feels like it doesn't have the emotional weight it should.
The FL is painful to read. All the blushing, trembling, and other things she does rather than talking. This is a woman that is supposed to be out risking her life in battle, has gone through some apparently harsh life experiences, and she acts like a coy 4 year old who is also a well adjusted adult? I think the author is trying to run with the jade beauty cliche while also spicing it up/filling it out but again it just is not fun to read.
I am glad I read it. I would encourage others to read it to see if they can get past the characters. But I won't be continuing from here.
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everything is good but why you nerf your hero to much you just need to make his level or power to equal to all. hero have to be strong not like this one . you should had done this in starting not in the on going story this make this story not likeable .In starting i was expecting a very good story but now....
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This is a well thought novel. The characters make it fun, but the world building stands out the most.
Depsite using a common plot, it still managed to distinguish itself.
The mc is also well written. He is not op, lots of efforts were put behind his achievement.
So far, I rate it top tier. It has potential
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You know Author-Sama that I have read your original before so you should have known I was coming to read this lol. I don't know the reason behind you restarting all over again but I'm sure that this is going to be great either way. I'm excited
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