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based on what I've read, it's a good read. also, it gives me some supernatural Grimm vibes.
great story just wish there where more chapters to read but the author has great upload speed its just me being greedy there is a little gramer problems here and there but you get whats supost to be written absolutely love this book
1) I absolutely love your story and you have my addiction burning.
2) The only real constructive feedback that I have for you is that when you realise you are using some words too many times (ex. Recomposing or ingress) that you use the thesaurus to give you more options to expand your vocabulary.
3) Last thing, try to utilize words that aren't a mouthful for people to read. Using a softer approach for the sentence "his ingress to the royal capital was a grand spectical to witness." could be changed to "his entrence to the royal capital was a grand sight to see." Those are just some general statements I made up, but the second sentence is far easier for people to read vice the former.
4) Again I love your story and your use of some interesting vocabulary and these are just some suggestions that could help amplify your writing.
THANK YOU AND I HOPE YOU GIVE THIS A READ OVER :D
the plot hole in this novel is deep as abyss, it;s so deep that even abyss won't bother to look back at you.
this is how the story goes
1. MC: I need STRENGTH!
2. got a little bit strength
3. act cocky, because he got cheat to fight higher lvl
4. beaten up badly
5. breakthrough in the middle of battle, and win
6. someone he kill have strong backer etc.
7. defeat his enemies
8. regret how much he lost
9. back to number 1
Raw Name: 这个诅咒太棒了
Raw chapter's: 308
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This is the story of a poor young man whose poverty even shreds apart their family willing to climb his way through society and into the top.
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The Star Wars Universe has a great potential for fanfics.
I think this novel is really great at the moment except for a few inconsistencies that can be ignored and would recommend it to others.
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
one of the best novel. i suggest everyone give a chance this novel. ...,....................................................................
Honestly you’re good at your description, it was clean and you can clearly see the storyline. Hope this will be notice and gets an exposure. Keep working author-san