I'm a simple guy, I see author of Profane Prince of Domination, I give notes 5, devil paragon retired and the Evil Dao inherited his legacy :')
if you mind: "oh that's interesting"! yeah, but even your start reading first 10 chapters. Just author type more about how feel and how not so cool MC and he good that, but in moment i hate woh much him like idiot, MC is very difficult. sorry author but i critical hate how your positing MC. just writing easy not so hard demotivated your character his not so fkng stupid MC him not need to up for story, he easy because u write how powerful him. uhh...im so angry why I'm reading so much ((
So far its great. I like this unique MC i haven't read in any novel. And also the System is very interesting. I'm really looking forward for more Chapters. And a Stability in Updates.
The Bai rip him off everything in the Auction, at first he got attention and treated well because he might be the son of some legendary figure and when they found out he is not they discard him and treated him like ****, next when they think he got some potential they made him apologize to the lady who rips him off in the Auction and also made him her bodyguard in some exploration, also he got arouse by the ladies from Bai family, this sums up the character of the MC, he is basically a dog and a skirt chaser.
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Low class killer suddenly turns OP after being able to kill with playing cards. That's a 1 sentence summary of all chapters released, and it is as bad as it sounds. The whole fly thing shouldn't even be in the title. Forget this one and move on...save your time and electricity.
One of the things that make a good story is the character. And this novel has it. The interaction between the characters almost seems realistic--the author uses many interesting words to describe each of the dialogue. For the story development, it was slow pace in the early chaps but after that it'd pick up. Adventure and thrills wouls start to move around. With a beautifully crafted English languague and creativity, I would recommend you to read this.
For the author, keep on writing. Story must be told.
i really like your story and i hope you continue to update its also i highly recommend everyone to add it to their own reading list . its a fantastic story good job author
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Translation is pretty good based on what I’ve read between here and the raw of the story. As for the rest, I always rate the trial read novels as 1 star for update stability since a majority of them get dropped at chapter 40. And the other 3 categories are rated 3 stars because this seems to be a rather generic story that has other very similar stories out there.