Hello, Author here, This is my first time writing a novel so I hope you like it. I know that there are a lot of improvements that I can make so I would appreciate it if you could write down what I can do to improve the story and give suggestions for the story.
the story idea is pretty good, but why can't I see much difference from the original novel ?? I even thought that this was just a copy paste of the original novel because only Mc's name changed
it's very nice to read this kind of relaxing novel in the genre of apocalypse the only problem is that mc have a childish personality cause of early death. I hope author can fix that In coming chapter .keep releasing new chapter .
wow...I'm really liking this book ... Its my first time here and i'm glad i choose this book ... keep up with this amazing work.. im waiting for the updates .