Antonius as the MC is different from the real life Antonius II who ruled Byzantium aka Constantinople back then.Antonius II emerged from monastery.This alternate Antonius is wild like Jack Sparrow. and i like it. ???
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700+ chapters in. This is basically yet another xianxia reincarnated-waste-girl face slapping story. But beware, the (apparent) ML intensely bullies the FL and has no personally redeeming qualities other than being handsome and strong. He's petty, hypocritical, selfish, inconsiderate, dishonest, unreliable, rude, violent, and arrogant. I loathe bully romances and that's what the romance is. The FL mostly just lets him get away with it. She's at her best when he's far away, but he's always around. Most of the other characters are annoying. Almost all of the comedy is not funny to me, because the butt of the joke is often the most likable character in the scene. "Bad things happening to good people" humor. The plot is medium (derivative, big gaps, and a lot of obvious contrivances, but adequate). If you like transmigration/cultivation stories, like bully romances, and like the humor you might enjoy.
It kinda sound's like the authors rambling on in the first 5 or so chapters. like they don't have a clear picture or understanding of what's they're writing. Overall the concept and ideas are there but I think they could've been developed further.
Let me get this point out of the way, It's funny, it's hella fun to read for short I really liked it. Good luck author I'm expecting more to come, Kudos to you!
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Started off with a very self aware MC of the cliches in urban novels. While the writing did more telling, instead of showing, I really wanted to give it a chance.
It only took about 13 chapters for him to forget all of that and embark on arrogant, very cringe face slapping. Kudos to the people who kept going to chapter 100. 20 was enough for me.
Hmm, I see some new story development here.
A Werewolf one.
It's really an amazing plot.
I don't know much about the western though.
The writing style is pretty good.
The introduction of the story is nice.
no compelling story just some random side characters praising how awesome and mysterious the mc is .
no proper explanation of the cheat just a brief outline . Since it takes place in modern world setting chinanumba1 sentiment will always be there and the racism. So I am out don't read this trash
i dont know why this is so highly rated .. maybe author deleting other reviews .. mostly focused on the romance/harem part .. feeling develop too quickly, story not yet developed enough to comment, .. awkward dialogue except that writing and everything was above the mark .. no proper grasp on the power levels , cause seems like he is both weak and strong / skip levels all at the same time .. 3.7