AmazeAngelo
Please start writing again I am enjoying this very much please don't drop this. please start writing again. please start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing again.
What should I say writing is not good lot of grammar and spelling mistakes it make less sense to read it starting also doesn't make sense back ground is poor
So this is the author from a different account.If you have any questions regarding the plot I can answer them, and I also wanna see if people actually read it cause I don't trust that view counter....
Me encanta la historia hasta ahora, no puedo esperar hasta la próxima actualización, ??? me encanta hasta el momento como va tomando rumbo la historia, sólo espero que al final se terminen metiendo con Zero de nuevo para que el se meta en sus asuntos y ayudé a Cross y a Dream
Story seems ok but the stability of updates is just not there thwy bring privilege then stop updating with not so much a message saying why or anything
Really good, just wish the MC didn't let the women in his life push him around. He really needs to learn to say no. His whole family women are trashy people.
I love it!! I don't usually read this genre but I loved this. It makes me want to play games, lol
Amazing work
I’m sorry but the translator is just awful. Extremely poor and inconsistent word choice is a constant when reading and absolutely ruins any sense of immersion.
This resembles MTL more than regular translation.
It's a great novel as far as it was released, good characters, very good character interaction
It's a great novel as far as it was released, good characters, very good character interaction
Mad oh, this story is mad. I was able to conceive exactly what the author is writing Just in chapter 1 & 2.. Nice story development. Dude.. wait let me pay some homage.; Sensei this is a promising story. Keep the **** up.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
