this had potential till you did one the worst things your could evee do 1. you made your mc evil thats just trash. all evil mc are just trash. 2. you forced corrupted and forced made the mc evil for litteraly no reason you made ut clear the ring would corrupt and twist the wearer yet the mc still chose the ring? why? thats stupid it would change who he is...the moment you amde this chkice this was no longer about an mc who went back in time to have a second chsnce at ljfe but a while new person that is just trash...
an amazing book author, I wanted to ask you something really but I found the review/comment section isn't the best of place to ask is there a way we can talk privately. sincerely your dear reader
I wanted to like the book, but so far out of 16 chapters about 6 of them have been about him stealing from the kitchen
The story development looks wonderful...I took an overview and it seems nice.... everything seems so clear to understand...names of characters are no difficult to carry-on with....
SilverQuill is my favorite writer at this point, I've finished his achievement junkie, I'm almost through Divine Beast Ascension, and I'm over 130 chapters into this here Fallen Conquerer! I just can't read anything else at this point because he is just so much better than anyone else I've found on the platform.
characters are in depth and feel real with real struggles, relatable, and the story progresses at an actual realistic and desirable pace. just fast enough to keep you in suspense without drowning you in progress.
I would 100% recommend giving Fallen Conqueror a read through and hop in Quill's Discord to be able to even talk with the man jimswlf about what you might want to see.
I am the author of 6 published novels (The Eternal Reflection novel series) and was asked to review the book. The opinions here are mine alone.
This is an interesting novel that seems to have many intersecting genres. At first, when I read it, I thought it was pure mystery. However, the surprise came when I read on, realizing that the murderer has potentially many supernatural and symbolic elements. Although I read until chapter 14 and am waiting for the book to conclude, it seems to blend mystery, horror, and religious fiction. This adds plenty of complexity to the novel, which is very intriguing to read! Plenty of religious and literary symbolism inside adds an interestingly complex plot with many interwoven dimensions. The pacing is moderate to fast, with well-defined plot points.
Also, the writing style, at a structural level, has good pacing. Fast and slow-paced scenes are balanced to develop the lives of the characters. The characters are multi-dimensional people with their pasts, literary past-times, and interests revealed slowly. There is minimal info-dumping, which is good, as the worldbuilding and characterizations are woven into dialogues and action. This is good writing. As I read on, the characters' voices become pretty unique and distinguished. There seems to be quite some tension between some of the characters, like the pastor, detectives, main characters, and their siblings. I hope to read on and find out - they add a large-than-life approach towards blending character and plot development.
The only flaw that I can see are slight formatting issues with the dialogues. I have informed the author on how to fix them. Hopefully, after this review, she will fix them. However, they do not take away from the well-written reading experience.
I patiently and excitedly await the release of chapters 15 onwards!
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story is good I like it just mc is little bit too cowardly but everything is OK but I don't know whether this novel is dropped or no so if author if you are reading this just reply it I kinda liked it to read so peace
Great story, the start was perfect and you describe the world in which they are living well. I have nothing bad to point out in your novel, your grammar and punctuation are good which is important for a novel.
Would recommend this to everyone who likes system novels.
The synopsis seems interesting enough, but I have a question. Will the angels look biblically accurate? If not, I’ll make a magical girl that can transform into a Seraphim-tier biblically-accurate angel.
This novel is one of the best I have ever read…. It gives the perfect balance bettween gameworld and real world both being interesting on their own with there own unique background that I enjoy. When talking abt real world and if he can get stronger or powerful in it….. Yes. Even if that part was slightly confusing to find out or not explained as much so far. It is well worth it. And this game world seems to be more than just a game with the subtle hints…. Makes this story even more interesting since everything can mean more than what an already great world and story than it already is. So even if the game world isn’t more than what it seems it is still a great read overall.Author thanks for making a great story! Please keep uploading.
this story is a good book and it has a lot of potential for it I like the character development and little hinge for the future