Prison Guard with Supernatural Abilities

Antonius as the MC is different from the real life Antonius II who ruled Byzantium aka Constantinople back then.Antonius II emerged from monastery.This alternate Antonius is wild like Jack Sparrow. and i like it. ???

Storyline is Okhave some nationalismkinda boringtranslation Quality is averageGive a try to pass timeit didn't hook me up..............

The author has barely put any effort into this novel. The MC doesn’t even show the intelligence of a child. He doesn’t cover up his tracks and gets in trouble. Uses dogs as expendables in a strategy that doesn’t make any sense at all. Comes up with strategies so stupid that even plot armour fails to keep up. In conclusion, let’s bury this and never speak of it again.

Interesting story, with a mysterious and exciting power system. I think it has a ton of potential and it growing like this proves it. I will add it to my collection and hope to see the author mature as a writer! Again, just the dialogue needs a touch-up, but it is suitable for now. Another updated review will come your way once I get deeper into the story!

"I'm not sure what to say about this story yet, but I wanted to leave a review to show my support. The comment section seemed a bit lonely, and I didn't want the author to feel discouraged. From what I've read so far (only the first chapter ?), the story isn't bad, but it's not entirely captivating either. The writing style is decent, but it lacks a certain spark or wow factor that would make it truly engaging. Despite this, I can tell the author is putting in effort, and that's something to be appreciated ?. Let's keep supporting them in their writing journey! (Sorry for the lengthy review! ?)"

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