it's just wish fulfilment novel. everything will go according to mc. in simple words it's boring
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This all started of fairly well with a seemingly interesting plot and an endearing main character. However after the Sect Test Arc reached the extra trial it finally revealed how garbage it truly was. The Sect Elders are all disabled overused cliche character tropes and unnecessarily small brained. It’s like a bunch of defective Korean Drama girls who try to act cute and tsundere-like, and a soft useless old man as a sect leader. The greedy 5th Martial Aunt has the same personality as a greedy rich young master type mixed in with a low-IQ, thinks she is smart, bossy girl. This has caused the novel to become straight and udder trash. It is simply unbearable. If the 5th Martial Aunt existed then I curse her whole family down nine generations to excruciating agony, unparalleled sorrow, and a life of extreme humiliation.
A good novel but the translation is not smooth.
There are many terms that are changed(ex: nightmare mode <-->dream mode?!) and conjugation mistakes are common(ex: were instead of was) .
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I just want to ask... this novel is already completed and the translation is up to chapter 878 with one chapter released a day... why upload to this site if you are the owner or translator? If not, it ain't nice to upload other people's work without permission.. thats all.
Broken English and grammar, cartoony characters and absolutely no legitimate plot; the story is just not really worth the time.
MC is in the role of "lul i could own this world if i wanted, but i don't, except, you know, i do, but i want a handicap, so watch me walk through the world blindfolded with my hands tied behind my back as i let people insult and spit on me where ever i go." which just never goes well for anyone involved.
Either make him all powerful and all knowing as you intended at the start or have him actually face danger, interesting plots and put him in a position to work for it. What you've done is remove all sense of conflict and tensíon right at the beginning of your story and then keep throwing various problems at him and force him to be pathetic in order to not show himself and fake tensíon, and it's just not fun to read. You can't have your cake and eat it too.
And, honestly, for someone on his 700th reincarnation, he is just ridiculously childish, but I suppose that reflects more on you as the writer.
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This story is very engaging and I love seeing what happens next. The character development is unique because the author tells how certain events shape history, but sometimes it can be a little sudden. This story would make an amazing comic even though the story does a brilliant job of helping the reader visualize the story. This is an amazing novel, would definitely recommend, keep up the good work.