Katana Nadeshiko

I like the plot. waiting for new chapters.

What an...."Original" Synopsis ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Please continue your novel. Your novel has potential that even in just chapter 2 im already invested in the story. Looking forward to your chapters!

The story is good. The only problem is that the MC is really really really really unlikable. He’s dumb, arrogant, he has an extremely short fuse, he is not creative, he is not brave (though not specially cowardly) and half the character development goes something like this: “Uh, I didn’t blow up over some trash talk, I grew up as a person.” 5min later… tries to start a fistfight and insults a dozen people over one disrespectful comment.And finally in one of the last chapters he goes all “woe is me” mixed with a “me against the world” mentality and goes all edgy, though idk if it was another temper tantrum or if he is like this now.Sorry had to vent.

Like who gives their own book a five-star review. I didn't want to do this but I had no choice.I'm writing this review for readers who have questions. Please ask your questions below.This is my first book and I hope not to disappoint.Thanks for reafding ?

The penguin spun the staff around, and Naruto ducked just in time to avoid getting clobbered over the head with it. But the Penguin spun around and brought the staff around a second time, smacking Naruto with the broad side of it and knocking him to the ground.