amazing read..
I like it
I like the book there are a few holes in it but all in all it isn't bad.
I hope that the author finds an editor soon. and will continue to upload chapters.
Good job.
The chapter that I look forward to the most during the day ! The story is interesting and we always want to know more at the end of each chapter.
Keep up the good work.
This is a master piece perfect world building combined with well fleshed out and realistic characters all shown to us threw a deep and impresive vocabulary that makes you hang off every paragraph and word. A update speed that is impresivley fast and a unique story idea makes this my favorite work on web novel and I would compare to such books as Harry Potter or the lord of the rings. This book is definitley a fun read and I would suggest it to anyone over 18. Thank you author for your consistent update speed and for writing such a amazing book, lots of love from a new fan.
Starts off extremely predatory, and then barely focuses on that aspect, but in the story it makes sense so not an issue yet considering pace of story and current number of chapters. Translation is trash and in the later chapters seems worse than MTL. Unless the original author was just very dumb. A lot of things are very unclear, the thought processes of some characters are inconsistent, but the story is progressing at a reasonable pace… kinda. Everyone is still in mortal stage, and foundation stage cultivators are considered a supreme fighting force. Not sure how well planned out the growth of the story is, but pretty solid start if you turn off your brain and just read the story. Also I think she is a crossdresser or thinks she’s a guy, but is a girl. You’ll know when you get there, because of translation it’s not easy to confirm
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i love everything about this novel.
Fun characters, cute story, both mc are cute together
It was a pleasure to read your story. When the main character manages to defeat the tall burly people, it's very impressive! Very cool. Next! I hope you can crazy up
The novel was good up unto the chapter where he was doing his magic awakening or something like dat, when I sad the chapter name about him maybe being a defect I wanted to drop the novel straight away but I changed my mind, I was gonna say how u gon give him a great background and then he can't awaken, but I also don't like the Character personality l, he hates them calling him a genius and almost gave up on his dream of being a swordsman cus a knight left
Read the first 10 chapters, not impressed. He's a soldier, who wakes up in a forest, he starts to realize that there's magic in this world. A military system activates and acts like his Commander, and he follows orders. he thinks if he goes against the system is suicide, so future beta MC. he acts like he's cautious to everything and cold face but then he's becomes a push over that listen to a random old man. What?!
Very good book, the author is very creative, this is a hidden gem in my opinion and it has huge potential, keep it up author. —————————1