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what the **** with this synopsis!!!
and who the **** chu nan!!!
why dont u **** up system!!!
and **** this novel!!!
**** times **** minus ****, **** nil!!!
respect +5 for making magic in english, not chinese XD
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Well, you need to improve the settings and such describe with 5 senses avoid to direct storytelling put feelings make the MC react :D also keep writing it improves the more you go so I await the further publishment
really cool book
Good story so far... Just hope it is a another world connected to the main world that Ethan and the others live in like the demon world... And the author can use it to explain where hybrids come from... It would be interesting...
Hey there Author, keep up the good work. The novel is coming great and I know that you can make it even better. So dont lose hope and do your best! ??
Hey!Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
Pingan was still in fear being paranoid of getting killed for no reason by the “experts” of this world. When The people of this world saw pingan’s cultivation they were wondering if their cultivation was fake
Great new concept that hasn't really been done before. Excited to see where it goes.The story great main cast of characters. Fans of Hunter x Hunter or great stories in genral will enjoy.
Would be better if the reader didn’t Have to go tru everyday of a babies life to get some action story has massive Potential But it just doesn’t Deliver on the action very slow story development for now I’m Dropping This until it picks up
read the raw. it is a good novel. too much drama for my taste though. the ending didn't feel rush even though the novel was short(over 300 ch). it felt like it ends because mc wanted it to end.