My first ReviewI understand that this is the Author's first novel and said that the first 40 chapters might be a bit rough.After Reading 9 chapters I was getting really annoyed about how many grammatical and spelling mistakes I could find. The Author doesn't use the words "The" and "a". For example:captian instead of The captianyoung man instead of a or the young man said...Gorilla said:"" instead of The gorilla said:""Furthemore the Author switches from 1st person to 3r person wich is getting me really confused. I had high hopes for this novel.Author! I don't know if correcting the chapters is very time consuming but please fix them so people can enjoy this novel it's not like you have to correct the tiniest mistake just the noticable ones.
The MC has so much plot armor, that it is already anoying. All the fights are the same. The MC wins the day, is being portrayed as someone with godly skill and all of that only 150 chapters in, while he has supposedly only the most basic powers.
the story had the potential with assassination system but mc a normal person in previous life fighting to death with previous assasins all bloody and where did he get his stealth skill when he was in enemy commander room who was supposedly spirt realm and killed him but it took so much effort to kill organ tempering realm the realms in this are mostly decorations and despite having the system mc is still the trash with his pathetic cultivation
absolutely love the story and the world design also how you expand the world and don't tunnel vision the story the only thing that can be considered bad is some bits of bad Grammer here and there but you can still understand what the characters are saying
