Amazing book with super overpowered main character.
love to see more chapters ☺️
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Definitely has the potential to be a very interesting read. Hopefully it gets picked.
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I write this to ask why. Why does webnovel locked the last 2 chapter behind the paywall? This story is completed so why do the reader have to pay for the privilege to read the last few chapter?
This is simply atrocious.
honestly the story makes me cringe. I read the first 5 chapters and it is just your run of the mill "My country" great, west bad type of book.
Isn't interesting.
I should recommend everyone to read this book ...omg
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skip the first ~45 chapters. if you've read the legendary mechanic + any vr gaming novel you'll pretty much know all the explained concepts and the storie really kicks off with the beast tide in chapter 45 so you should be fine. the pacing in the beginning is pretty bad since the author explains everything for complete genre newbies which is fine but boring for vets. aside from that i think this story could become very good it's currently to early to say (chapter 100) since the players haven't yet arrived nor have we explored the universe but i have some faith in the author he has demonstrated some skill in previous works so we should be fine. mc likes hiding his powerlevels so be ware of that although this too seems to become less egregious as we get deeper into the story. don't let this review stop you from reading the story but i had to take of some stars for the rough start. The English is excellent.
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Thanku author I will keep your warning in mind and will not read the novel,.....,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,m,m,m,m.,.,.,.,.,...z.,.,.,.,..,.,..,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,..,.,,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,
I have read the current available chapters (20) and so far I am enjoying the read. It’s the standard weak to strong trope with a system to aid his development. The system is actually sentient and sounds rather interesting. So far he has a goal, the usual one to be better than everyone else and be recognised, no apparent love interest, though the girl he saved may become one but that is purely speculation at this stage. The idea of the house being his avenue to success is something I haven’t read before but it does appeal, especially when he mentions there is over 40 rooms inside so there is a lot of room to grow in this story.Anyways, it is early days and I would recommend this to readers to support and follow.
I like how the author creates and depicts the mc as an overpowered being, yet sticks to the morals of a human being but still shows his overwhelming strength, I think the book is brilliant
Very well thaught out, the ***** scenes are not the plot but are part of the development. Battle and character development are well paced and placed. Keep it up!