Keith_Samayo
I did like the story and the concept behind it but I wish that there would be more chapters coming out but I am guessing that is not going to happen anytime soon
One of my favorite novel translation. The translator’s translation skill is amazing and easy to understand when reading this novel. I am waiting to read your daily update.❤️❤️❤️
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A very detailed novel written wonderfully. I like it slow-paced yet the Plot is very moving despite that. A good read novel for the readers.
A review at 20 chapters.
I posted a couple of comments in the first chapters about what the MC was even there for, figuring that he would just be a slave of the system. I'm really not a fan of that type of trope, so I was dreading reading another story where the MC is led around by the nose.
Turns out I was half right, in that the MC isn't led around by the system, but by the situation and the customers he's helping. Which could be seen as a distinction without a difference. But it turns out it's not important at all.
You see, the MC isn't really the MC. He's a side character, and that's fine. The system isn't the MC either, as it just facilitates what the MC needs to do. No, the real main character isn't a character at all, but the story itself. Or rather, the stories contained within the story.
So far, in 20 chapters, there has been one completed story, and most of a second. The first was... heart wrenching. Good in its way, but the characters involved are really something else. There's anger, there's sadness, there's actual emotion that's pretty rare to find in these parts.
But the second story, well, it's just... beautiful. A story of a noble heart and unwavering spirit that is truly touching.
And where are the MC and the system in all this? They're just facilitating the stories being told. And that's just fine.
interesting premise so pls vote for this
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Hello, this is Snowstar. I wanted to highlight a few points that the readers need to consider before starting the novel.
1) MC usually has a fake bright personality on the surface but is cold on the inside. So, readers can expect a ruthless MC from time to time.
2) MC isn't OP from the start. He goes from weak to strong.
3) MC is a grey character. Due to his inner cold personality, he might lean to the evil side from time to time. Most importantly, he isn't forgiving to those who cross his bottom line.
4) Romance isn't the focus of the novel.
5) There will be side stories for the central characters more often.
6) The update stability will be 7ch/wk. Depending on its popularity, it might increase or decrease in the future.
Any questions, feel free to ask here or in the comments section of the chapters. I'll try my best to answer them
In short, this novel follows a in the beginning mostly average person in his adventure into the VR-game A New World (ANW). The story includes several deep topics, from AI over what is life to psychological topics. It also has a slow progress in the overarching story progression. Many different things happen and there is a good mix of action, adventure and training both in-game and out-of-game with an in-depth magic system. The MC does really not get any rest.
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Writing Quality: Some minor errors which do not hamper comprehension. Action scenes are exciting and even the complex topics are understandable (if you do not rush read through the chapters).
Story Development: The MC and the whole story makes slow but constant progress, which I find a much more realistic flow for a VR Novel. There was only one big timeskip in about 500 chapters, but I did not miss any. Where would they come from? Games are designed to be exciting and the MC does more than what the average player would. This novel also developes the real life story, which is rare. Real life does not stop just because there is an in-game event and it is the same the other way arround.
The different encounters and events/quest are always exciting and the whole feel of the VR-Game which is too real for what a game is supposed to be is integrated well. New storylines are always introduced in a sensible way and up till now none of them were abandoned.
Character Design: All characters have depth to them but backgrounds are not just dumped on the reader and thus only told, when a character asks or feels the need to give info. This means, that the reader has to think about how characters act and interact to get a comprehensive picture of the characters.
Update Stability: Very good. One to two chapters a day with even length. Small pauses only when significant problems occur. Direct reader interaction from small backlog.
World Background: The most realistic VR novel I have seen. Both real life and the game world are resonable and thought out. Cool and interesting magic system which does require thinking by the reader and rereading of past chapters after long pauses in reading.
Compared to go "Mages are too op": Magic system keeps this detailed description which was only present in the early chapters of MATO. 500 chapters in this novel might be about at 100 chapters of MATO by developement of MC.
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Interesting synopsis buuut.. then I see this "however what they didn't expect was that zombies had unimaginable VITALITY!!"
filler filler f
I very much like the other book written by the author.
So I am excited for this one.
