4 star for now ..will update later
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This book will flourish into an amazing story that will continue to develop, and entrap you in its warm brace. So please share it with everyone you know let them know of this humble begging. How this novel will forfill it's goal.
An interesting book.
here goes my random thoughts :
"To think There is only one age to be happy, just one time in each person's life when it is possible to dream, make plans, and have enough energy to fulfill them despite all the difficulties and obstacles. One age to be enchanted with life to live passionately and enjoy everything with all the intensity, without fear or guilt of feeling pleasure. The golden phase in which we can create and recreate life in our own image and likeness, clothe ourselves in all colors, taste all flavors and indulge in all loves without prejudice or shame. Time of enthusiasm and courage when all willingness to try something again and again as often as needed. This fleeting age in our lives is called the present and lasts for the instant that passes."
Please please please let this novel see the light of day I beseech you...... Great fame novel really hoping for the novel to finally get fully translated not dropping it like others.
Raw Title: 我有一群地球玩家Status: 885 Chapters (Ongoing)Story is similar to other novel in which a game is developed and later players enjoy the game. This novel is based on Sci-fi theme. By seeing the chapter it can be guessed that in few chapters, the game world will be exposed to real world (~100 chapters).
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So this was definitely an interesting story which can attract those who play these types of games such as myself and I enjoy how the author was able to capture the feeling like the odd one out around many other experienced players. Sadly, while the current story is very interesting, it is riddled with grammatical errors, bland descriptions, and a severe lack of emotions. There is much, and I mean much to be desired from the novel as it has a great plot but it isn't executed very well. Taking some time to re-read your chapters and rewrite them will definitely increase the popularity of your story. Writing isn't that easy, but I know you can improve!
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Author is certified insane * meant as a compliment * Comedy is great. So far seems like a mashup of a shitload of animes, MC reminds me of vash the stampede, but in SAO. Once he deals with grammar issues I believe this novel could be super duper awesome.
Love it