This is the beginning of a great harem novel with an interesting system. Hopefully, the author can return and give us more.
This is one of the best Storys i have ever read on this app. The characters feel so genuine and refreshing its honestly amazing. The balance between the 2 protagonists characters and there romance is written to absolute perfection My only point of criticism would be this story would really profit from a bit of proove reading. Dont get me wrong it is by no means badly written, its just that sometimes there is a word too much or a Word missing etc. doesnt really effect the reading in any dramatic way tho.
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I'd give this negative stars if possible. Cheating isn't okay. A whole novel dedicated to cheating. Don't celibate ruining relationships. It's just sick and wrong
5th chapter and it's already come to the first young master and first face slapping. sigh totally disappointed still will give a further review after reading all the available chapters.
Story is fun and the mc (while op) doesn't feel too op, he gets the items/skills right before needing them but its incorporated in the story in a "good way".
Disclaimer: You might (most likely) need to turn off your brains to read this and enjoy it to its fullest.
Grammar is meh but it it improves in later chapters (or the mistakes are less obvious)
Why the beginning of the story we can't say much, but it's a great plot with a nice, rare subject talking about marriage of the protagonist right at the beginning even more with a type of wife we all love: a Kitsune waifu. Part of it is also about the recovery of spiritual energy in the world and what I have a great expectation about this development I hope other readers who see this review can support the book heading towards the 800 chapters. I highly recommend it for those who got here and are interested in reading.
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Writer's Review...
A easy going story about a reincarnated boy with dream of becoming the greatest cultivator in existence.
And a book that held all the secrets of the universe
This is a very good novel which remains true to it's name till the very end. It has a slow beginning and remains slow and laid-back till the end, a slice of life novel to be exact. Don't expect too much action, it has a bit of drama, a bit of politics and a lot of fluff.
Writing quality is average with a bit of grammatical errors in the beginning, characters are good and so is the world background.
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It has ainz-sama so ill give it a chance