Great work so far but the could you space things properly So it is easier To read otherwise Great Job keep It up # Godzilla is smexy just saying
There's no chapter... It should be, unless my account is special and WN specifically elude it from me...Yet... There's a few review with five star for no reason... For a story that got no chapter... So I'm going to put 1star,the lowest I could get even when I want to throw in 0star review..
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WHY IS IT BASED ON EARTH?! A GOOD SYPNOSIS, A FANTASTIC PLOT AND BACKGROUND BUT WHYYY IT WON'T EVEN ESCAPE THE CLUTCHES OF TOO KUCH NATIONALITY AND CHINA #1
it's pretty good.
just another ctrl+c ctrl+v novel.mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmhmhmhmhmhmhmhmhhmmhhmmhmhgmhmmhmhmhmhmmhmmhmhhmmhmhmh
same author as doomsday online...no thanks... author has a habit of not finishing his novels..this even looks like doomsday...starting with an angel?
It's another weak to powerful Pet novel. I thought the cheat system would be cool since it's basically a trainer, but it instantly gets nerfed into a generic system. It's not super interesting.
This sounds alright has anyone got the raws for this novel ..................................???????????????????????ggghhhhhhbnjgggh God dam the 150 character rule
Big Fan of the Autor and Lucas
I was drawn into the novel from the first chapter but the more chapters I read, the less exciting it became and I feel it was because you paid too much attention to the background information as compared to character interaction and developments but it's a great write up nonetheless.Keep the good work up ?
Where do we draw the line between good and evil? When can a villain's violent nature and blood-soaked past be used for good?
A lot of readers get hooked by the carnage or the humor. Indeed, the interactions can be humorous, but there are deep moral dilemmas too.
The author isn't afraid to give us a pure evil MC. He's even added some coding for prejudices about race and mental health even though the main focus seems to be on the morality behind actions.
The MC kills for fun, but loves his family, and probably will learn to love others too. Mega Girl has the outer appearance of doing good, but this might be due to her mysterious conditioning and not her own inner moral compass.
There's an overarching moral question hidden outside the mechanics of their superpowers, and behind the curtains of the comedy. I never thought I would enjoy unpacking it, but I am!
All the strong people in this book have a flaw with their morality that changes how we can perceive their actions. It's fascinating!
I'm up to ch140 and I can't wait to see where this goes.
Now, judging the writing itself, the gender pronouns he/she sometimes get switched, which breaks immersion. Also, the world building seems to dumb down political powers to make individual characters seem smarter, which is a little lazy. The high-class academy gets attacked by villains way too easily, imo, but that is mostly the oversaturated market and exposure.
I still enjoy every bit, no matter how cheesy or "edgy"
9/10 would reccomend. It's just one step away from being as good as Super Minion on Royal Road.