Really good chapter one, haven't seen any mistake. Good grammar and unique permise
That game is weirdly exciting. I can't wait for him to play the puzzle. It sure gotta give me chills and hopefully not a heart attack. The anticipation itself is making me ...
Meh, too long winded. took eight chapters to do something that could easily be achieved in three. Other than that, story’s pretty good but still wont bother seeing how it develops
Hello Author.First of all this was my first time reading a novel totally based on "Love Story" especially highschool (without any fantasy elements). And congrats Author you made me make a great decision---To not read any more in this kind. How can single people like me survive this kind of things.Jokes apart, this novel is good. I liked Luke and his personality. Everything about this novel seems way tooo good, to the point you would never see anything like this in real life.So people just thank the Author who provided this.And trust me I am not gonna give a try for any another novel like this.I am a guy who don't like to stop anything in the middle, untill and unless Author totally Su*ks his own work in the future.Anyway, All the Best Author.
This webnovel is over 3000 chapters and should be less than half of the way done considering the main character still hasnt embarked on his grand voyage. Exlor's writing is filled with excessive dialog, detail and explanation. It's clear this saga is just meandering without a clear timeline and will inevitably take 10 years to write or eventually go on permanent hiatus due to a loss in popularity or author's eventual loss of interest. Getting invested would be a mistake.
I found this story on a webnovel discussion, they said it was interesting. I was curious and read one to five chapters. The author explains this story well, the characters are clearly described. The plot is focused and does not deviate. Good work!
I’d give an honest review. I really enjoy this book. It has a nice concept, good world building and the main character is well thought out. Most other characters don’t have much depth to them but it’s understandable, it’s a game with many players. I would say that I didn’t like the story development that much. It’s the classic “new power up, stronger adversaries”. How can he clash with an ancient dragon here but is scared of a baby one there. He would fight toe to toe with the strongest people in one place but go somewhere else that should on the same level but meet much stronger opponents. I know it’s for the story but I don’t like it. He can’t be losing every other mental battle, how would any other person survive on the continent if that was the case.I am also frustrated by the horrible editing further into the book, especially in the privileged chapters. These things make or break your book. Do better.I would writing a book soon and I know my review may seem harsh, but take it as constructive criticism. I do like your book hence my incessant support.
5/5 must read book. No other isekai is as good as this, tropes which are unexpected, and what I expects to happens, ends up being a twist. Good read, cannot wait for new chapters to be published.
This is one hell of a great nove, I can't wait for it to be lunched. It is similar to the devil's cage except that jason is more like a mix of Kieran and gluttony which you should have guessed from the title, they have the same leveling system except that jason get points when he eat monsters which he can use to power up his skills or learn new ones and he smells an attractive aroma when he is near dead monster body and if the meat of the monster isn't fresh he gets a lower number of points which like force him to kill them or be near the scene to maximize his benefits, oh and i forgot that he is basically immortal as long as he has enough points to heal himself. All right I will say no more you better pick this up since this is a gem
As I'm Thai, I'm really surprised to see a Thai ppl writing a novel here. it's really good and kinda refreshing from chinese author. Well, as we have different culture, it reflected clearly on your writting that it's totally different from typical Chinese modern magical realism novels. Such as smart protagonist or romance scene.
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This novel is amazing if you continue like this for a hundred chapters you hopefully get in to 100 ...........................
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This is the sake for the 3-year badge so I don't have anything to say to me. But I hope that the person who is reading this will try and read my novel. I know that it isn't that good but please read it and rate it for me so that I can improve.